Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Well, Ned's been in the corn liquor too many times.
Your script was fun to read, Bill. Not too sure their
Mensa Club will rate up there with the ones who
have no Ned, but then Ned wouldn't be in one
unless he and Pons formed their own. I hadn't read
this one when first posted, so thanks for reposting.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022

Thanks, Jan

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

This is a fun one on Pons and Ned. I feel smarter knowing I have a high IQ, and I look forward to hearing more from this duo of deep thought.

Sending you my best today as always
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022

Both guys are deep. One is cerebral and the other like a tar pit.

Comment from Cindy Decker 2

Excellent

Bill,
I love this razz on Mensa. My nephews dad is a member and he took his son to a baseball outing with other members of their local Mensa chapter. My young nephew was bored to tears as the member sat in their seats, oblivious to the game, discussing black holes and medical breakthroughs. He Ed bored to tears!
I like your dialogue in the story, it made me laugh. I really like the characterization in this chapter.
Good luck with this, Bill!
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022

Thank you, Cindy, for your great review. Bill

reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 05-Sep-2022

You?re welcome, Bill.😊

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

I know of Trump though not being an American I may have got lost in some of the translations in this one, I still love the lingo, another wonderful read ****kahpot

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022

Thanks, kahpot

Comment from royowen

Good

Poor old Pons, being around someone as intelligent as Ned wouldn't be easy, but he certainly makes room in your scripts Bill, well done, another brilliant post, blessings Roy
Typo : (Intelligant) dudes. Intelligent?

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022

Ned pronounces the word * int elegant * : )

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

This seems timely, Bill. I guess back in 2016, we didn't meet yet? I guess the once tweeter-in-chief needs to come clean about lots of information he's been messing with. Good commentary about the effects of tweets and rumors and misunderstandings about lots of things.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022

Thanks, Helen

Comment from BethShelby

Exceptional

LOL This is hilarious. I had no idea Pons and Ned were alive back then. I wasn't around in 2016. I think Ned and Trump could start their own Densa club.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022

Densa !! That*s a good idea, Beth.

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

I just read an exactly same script. But I will earn some promotion point by reviewing this again. I like you write about Trump and tweeter.

Well done.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022

Thanks, Lisa.

Comment from robyn corum

Exceptional

Bill,

Oh, yeah. This will appease me. Good job. I will remain silent on the matter of the Presidential Run since I have a new focus.

This series definitely deserved a continuation. Thanks!

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022

Thank you, Robyn. : )

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Everything in this script is good, realistic, interesting to read, enjoyable the order of expression, misspellings are more interesting; Mensa Club's business or activities are real in approach and understanding, activation and personal references are notable; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022

Thanks, ALD