Comment from winnona

Excellent

Beautiful artwork that completes a well-written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well. Your words flowed well and combined easily forming the message of the poem for the reader.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2016

Thanks for the review. I wish there was a spiritual balm for the world. Cheers, j

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Outstanding essence poem--captures the flavor of the theme in the voicing. Fine presentation. Nice rhymes. Enjoyed. Happy Holidays.

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2016

Thanks for your review. I wish there was a spiritual balm. I would like to practice those internal rhythms that kuch does so well. I wish you a warm and wonderful Christmas and a peaceful New Year. Thanks for all your advice and I am glad we are friends in prose, namaste, Judy

reply by rama devi on 16-Dec-2016

Thanks for your lovely reply, Judy. Gad we're friends too. There IS a spiritual balm--the presence of saints and great Gurus, like my Amma (www.amritapuri.org). She has hugged close to 40 million people with her balm-like presence of unconditional love...

reply by rama devi on 16-Dec-2016

Namaste! :)

Comment from wondertwin

Excellent

Wonderfully done! and a very quick impromptu! (very short timeline to create the poem) And yes, it is a peaceful balm :) Blessings, AmyJo

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2016

Thanks for the review. We have such a beautiful planet and an interesting mosiac of people, I wish we could get along and appreciate how blessed we are. Yes, a spiritual balm. Cheers j