Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "When we met."Words to pass on to my children
5 total reviews
Comment from Ella25
Words of love and admiration. To fulfil that emptiness and embrace the sorrow. Fill the heart with happiness and delight with encouraging words of love and better tomorrow. Sweet image of a happy couple complements the words of each stanza. Well done. Blessings, Ella
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2016
Words of love and admiration. To fulfil that emptiness and embrace the sorrow. Fill the heart with happiness and delight with encouraging words of love and better tomorrow. Sweet image of a happy couple complements the words of each stanza. Well done. Blessings, Ella
Comment Written 18-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2016
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Thanks Ella for your excellent review. Mary
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You are more than welcome, Mary. Ella
Comment from Joan E.
Your poem sounds autobiographical--if not, you took on a strong persona. I admired your rhymed couplets in these quatrains and your "kitten" simile. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2016
Your poem sounds autobiographical--if not, you took on a strong persona. I admired your rhymed couplets in these quatrains and your "kitten" simile. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 15-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2016
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Yes Joan it is, and the photo is of me and my Husband, from a long time ago, In the early eighties.
Thanks for the review, there were great entries so I got not votes in the contest. win some lose some. Mary
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I guessed it was a picture of you. Better luck next contest- Joan, back from New Orleans and way behind...
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your lovely poem. It flows with a great message of love. I also like the way it rhymes and your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts. Happy Holidays and good luck in the contest.
angel 123
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2016
I enjoyed reading your lovely poem. It flows with a great message of love. I also like the way it rhymes and your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts. Happy Holidays and good luck in the contest.
angel 123
Comment Written 13-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2016
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Thanks angel for your excellent review and nice comments. Mary
Comment from AnnaLinda
Poet,
That is a really sweet photo and your your Two stanza poem entry is
quite divine...if that's okay to borrow your word. Very nice smooth
flow and rhymes and romantic theme.
Love it and best wishes in the booth,
Linda
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2016
Poet,
That is a really sweet photo and your your Two stanza poem entry is
quite divine...if that's okay to borrow your word. Very nice smooth
flow and rhymes and romantic theme.
Love it and best wishes in the booth,
Linda
Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2016
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Thanks Linda I appreciate your review and kind comments.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A lovely poem about the person you adore and an excellent contest entry. You should do well. It seems to meet all the requirements for this contest.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2016
A lovely poem about the person you adore and an excellent contest entry. You should do well. It seems to meet all the requirements for this contest.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2016
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Thanks Thomas for an excellent review and kind comments.