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Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "When we met."
Words to pass on to my children

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Comment from Ella25
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Words of love and admiration. To fulfil that emptiness and embrace the sorrow. Fill the heart with happiness and delight with encouraging words of love and better tomorrow. Sweet image of a happy couple complements the words of each stanza. Well done. Blessings, Ella

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2016
    Thanks Ella for your excellent review. Mary
reply by Ella25 on 18-Dec-2016
    You are more than welcome, Mary. Ella
Comment from Joan E.
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Your poem sounds autobiographical--if not, you took on a strong persona. I admired your rhymed couplets in these quatrains and your "kitten" simile. Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2016
    Yes Joan it is, and the photo is of me and my Husband, from a long time ago, In the early eighties.
    Thanks for the review, there were great entries so I got not votes in the contest. win some lose some. Mary
reply by Joan E. on 16-Dec-2016
    I guessed it was a picture of you. Better luck next contest- Joan, back from New Orleans and way behind...
Comment from angel123
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I enjoyed reading your lovely poem. It flows with a great message of love. I also like the way it rhymes and your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts. Happy Holidays and good luck in the contest.

angel 123

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2016
    Thanks angel for your excellent review and nice comments. Mary
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Poet,

That is a really sweet photo and your your Two stanza poem entry is
quite divine...if that's okay to borrow your word. Very nice smooth
flow and rhymes and romantic theme.

Love it and best wishes in the booth,

Linda

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2016
    Thanks Linda I appreciate your review and kind comments.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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A lovely poem about the person you adore and an excellent contest entry. You should do well. It seems to meet all the requirements for this contest.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2016
    Thanks Thomas for an excellent review and kind comments.