Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I had to go back a couple of weeks to find a poem I missed, but I was pleased to find that you too entered the Story Poem contest. I enjoyed your mono-verse rhyme per stanza in these quatrains. I too believe in science and evolution and admired your description of "times of changing winds". Here's to "each to his own"! Hugs and happy holidays- Joan

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016

Hi Joan,
You are such a good fan to have to go looking for my past posts. I appreciate your ongoing support of my work. I hope you are enjoying your resting time with the family. I am enjoying my time here in France with my Daughter and her family, We will be back in Ireland only for two days then to Spain for 1 week to check the villa, as you may have seen on the news the rain and floods. But I think ours is Ok. Mary

reply by Joan E. on 24-Dec-2016

Thank you for your warmhearted response. I am pleased to hear you are enjoying the holiday season traveling with your daughter and her family. I hope that all is well at your property in Spain and that you have a lovely Christmas weekend. More hugs- Joan

Comment from angel123

Excellent

Your story within a poem is well written. It flows and rhymes well and your artwork choice is beautiful. I don't agree with your message about evolution, but my review is not based on your message, but on how well you wrote your poem. There would be no science without a Most High God and did you ever stop to think that science, evolution and the big bang was all a part of God divine plan. I wonder if you have ever given God a chance. Tried to open your heart to find out if he really exist. I think what you find out about the Holy Spirit will amaze you. Change your whole life. Happy holidays!

angel 123

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2016

Thanks Angel, for your excellent rating of my poem. I appreciate the time you have taken to review and offer kind words about God. All of my family are devout Christians, so I have heard it all before, but I am a non believer and I cannot see myself change. Mary

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

As a poem this is excellent, The words flow well and the opinions are well stated. I was a science major in college. I believe in a "life force" call it God or whatever. Way back in time there was a beginning something that put life into cells and from there it developed. What started that Life spark we will never know.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2016

Thanks For your excellent review and your opinions of the beginnings. I appreciate your comments and I agree that we will never know.
Mary

Comment from Kurisu

Excellent

I loved the poem and If I Was To Tell You...
The poem mostly rhymes but is true.
I believe in the big bang theory
I also believe God
set off the dynamite.
Best wishes. Kurisu.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016

Thanks for your encouraging review and best wishes for the contest.

reply by Kurisu on 11-Dec-2016

What contest

reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016

it is called( Story poem) contest. it should be on the voting list soon.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written story/poem. No one can judge another person for what they believe. How we act and treat others have nothing to do with faith or religion.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016

Thanks for the excellent review, and best wishes for the contest.