Mirrored Mutuality
Equality3 total reviews
Comment from angel123
I love everything about your poem. Subject, title, art presentation especially and the message. It flows and rhymes well and I enjoyed reading it.
angel 123
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016
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I love everything about your poem. Subject, title, art presentation especially and the message. It flows and rhymes well and I enjoyed reading it.
angel 123
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016
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Angel 123, thanks for this and the stars are wonderful!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
An excellent contest entry. You picked a difficult style but you write it well. The picture is excellent. Good luck. I hope you win.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016
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An excellent contest entry. You picked a difficult style but you write it well. The picture is excellent. Good luck. I hope you win.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016
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Thomas, Thanks so much!!!!!! Much appreciated.
Comment from rama devi
Clever rhyme trio and fine theme. Good presentation too. The flow could be improved, I think, by sculpting it with punctuation and no capping each line so the enjambment is clear is also recommended. Example:
Seize
mutuality, please--
keys!
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016
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Clever rhyme trio and fine theme. Good presentation too. The flow could be improved, I think, by sculpting it with punctuation and no capping each line so the enjambment is clear is also recommended. Example:
Seize
mutuality, please--
keys!
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016
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Thx. I appreciate the insight
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:-)))
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