Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi
This is an excellent entry into the 1-6-1 contest. it is timely and the rhymes are very good. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Mary

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. Appreciate your comments. Cheers .... ;o)

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 1-6-1, Santa's Sleigh, does the syllable count right and includes extra rhyme ends to make the season bright. Nice job.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016

Thanks. Glad you liked it. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o)

Comment from angel123

Excellent

I like your well written poem and I enjoyed reading it. It flows with cheer for this holiday season. It also rhymes well and I also like your artwork choice.

angel 123

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016

Thanks. Glad you liked this poem and artwork. Appreciate your comments. Cheers .... ;o)

Comment from kathleenspalding

Excellent

Hohoho! What a cute one six one! Gave me a smile using very few words. Excellent choice of artwork. Flows well. Thanks for writing and sharing. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed this little 1-6-1 and the artwork. Appreciate all your comments. Cheers ... ;o)

reply by kathleenspalding on 12-Dec-2016

You're welcome

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

Christmas, my friend is love in action. Every time we love, every time we give, it's Christmas. Thanks for sharing this delightful poem.
Bill~

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016

Thanks, Bill. Glad you enjoyed this little poem. Appreciate all your comments. Cheers ... ;o) Art

Comment from Ella25

Excellent

Clear, my dear. On the way to brings us cheer. Well done on your entry for 1-6-1. It was a pleasure to read. Blessings, Ella

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016

Thanks, Ella - Glad you enjoyed it. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;>)

Comment from valmay

Excellent

A complete story in six syllables, relevant to the festive season. Maybe I'm a kid at heart but I'm hoping Santa visits me because if he doesn't those deer better steer clear. Good luck.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016

Sent Santa a note to be sure to visit you this year. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o)

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Cute little 1-6-1. I find these SO difficult to write! You chose a very timely topic, and a beautiful picture, should be a winner!!! Blessings...

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed this short poem and the artwork. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o)

Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Mystery author, lots of alliteration in this short 1 6 1 poem for the
contest. I like the Dear deer ... cheer clear. Also, nice rhyming in
Dear deer steer cheer clear. Also every word rhymes.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016

Glad you enjoyed this 1-6-1. Appreciate all your comments. Cheers ... ;o)

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

This is an excellent contest entry. It meets all the requirements for this contest. Good luck. It would also be good in a children's book. You should submit it to a publisher.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016

Thanks. Glad you liked this 1-6-1 poem. Appreciate all your comments. Cheers .... ;o)