High in the sky I fly
A mono-rhyme poem24 total reviews
Comment from cumulus365
You chose the "Ä«" sound which makes that end rhyming sounds soothing throughout the poem. You did a superb job at creating a poem that tells of a bird's panoramic view from the vast sky. I like the use of poetic technique to capture a reader's attention by using personification in this three-stanza poem to portray what birds do. The illustration's effort to enhance the meaning of the poem is achieved. The meaning of the poem expresses the lonely life of birds gliding up in the sky and that is what they were bred to do but be a friend to and acknowledge a walk away. Birds are happy to see us if we throw it some foods to nibble on.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2016
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You chose the "Ä«" sound which makes that end rhyming sounds soothing throughout the poem. You did a superb job at creating a poem that tells of a bird's panoramic view from the vast sky. I like the use of poetic technique to capture a reader's attention by using personification in this three-stanza poem to portray what birds do. The illustration's effort to enhance the meaning of the poem is achieved. The meaning of the poem expresses the lonely life of birds gliding up in the sky and that is what they were bred to do but be a friend to and acknowledge a walk away. Birds are happy to see us if we throw it some foods to nibble on.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a great weekend coming.
Comment from Joan E.
This is a very clever mono-verse rhyme, and you selected a terrific picture to accompany it. Best wishes in the contest and keep flying high! -Joan
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This is a very clever mono-verse rhyme, and you selected a terrific picture to accompany it. Best wishes in the contest and keep flying high! -Joan
Comment Written 09-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a great weekend coming.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem fulfills the monorhyme requirements and gives the reader something to ponder. Is this from the point of view of these birds? Hmm.
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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2016
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This poem fulfills the monorhyme requirements and gives the reader something to ponder. Is this from the point of view of these birds? Hmm.
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Comment Written 09-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a great weekend coming.
Comment from Ulla
Wow Robina, I think you've done very well with this. It has a very nice flow and imagery, and quite a haunting message. Well done. All the best. Ulla:)))
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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2016
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Wow Robina, I think you've done very well with this. It has a very nice flow and imagery, and quite a haunting message. Well done. All the best. Ulla:)))
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Comment Written 09-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a great weekend coming.
