High in the sky I fly
A mono-rhyme poem24 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
LOL oh my you went all our and I love it,.
You made all of this fit and it made total sense,.
Very well done. And if you pass by....
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LOL oh my you went all our and I love it,.
You made all of this fit and it made total sense,.
Very well done. And if you pass by....
Comment Written 09-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed weekend.
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good job.
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good job.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed weekend.
Comment from BeasPeas
Your poem rhymes well and I think it's a good entry for the contest. I like the monorhyme as a form. Your poem is playful and illustrated well. Marilyn
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Your poem rhymes well and I think it's a good entry for the contest. I like the monorhyme as a form. Your poem is playful and illustrated well. Marilyn
Comment Written 09-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed weekend.
Comment from royowen
Well done with this mono rhyme poetic entry in this contest Ine, you've quite definitely scribed a qualifier here, I think the theme of soaring like an eagle is a most propitious one, great entry, good luck. Blessings, Roy
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Well done with this mono rhyme poetic entry in this contest Ine, you've quite definitely scribed a qualifier here, I think the theme of soaring like an eagle is a most propitious one, great entry, good luck. Blessings, Roy
Comment Written 09-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed weekend.
Comment from RGstar
Good expressive form. Fun to read. I quite like this form...a little bit of a challenge.
Good luck in the competition.
Best wishes.
RGstar
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Good expressive form. Fun to read. I quite like this form...a little bit of a challenge.
Good luck in the competition.
Best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 09-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed weekend.
Comment from krys123
Happy holidays to you and your, Ine;
-I really enjoyed your mono rhyming poem and it was done very well for a heart particular format to do.
-All of your rhyming words were contingent and supportive to the meaning and concept of each and all of your lines therefore making the reading smooth.
-I like how you composed the picture with your writing which is very supportive and relative to the conceptual theme.
-I like your self-analysis which was very indicative to the Eagle that soar so high with freedom that is proud.
-Good luck in the contest and take care and have a good one when you can during these holidays.
Alex
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Happy holidays to you and your, Ine;
-I really enjoyed your mono rhyming poem and it was done very well for a heart particular format to do.
-All of your rhyming words were contingent and supportive to the meaning and concept of each and all of your lines therefore making the reading smooth.
-I like how you composed the picture with your writing which is very supportive and relative to the conceptual theme.
-I like your self-analysis which was very indicative to the Eagle that soar so high with freedom that is proud.
-Good luck in the contest and take care and have a good one when you can during these holidays.
Alex
Comment Written 09-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed weekend.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A nice nature poem using the form Monorhyme.
It's cute and fun. A sort of spirit lifter.
Good to know you aren't a spy.
Good luck in the contest,
Rhonda
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A nice nature poem using the form Monorhyme.
It's cute and fun. A sort of spirit lifter.
Good to know you aren't a spy.
Good luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 09-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed weekend.
Comment from judiverse
Wow! You did a great job with this monorhyme. Excellent word choices. You must be one of those drones flying about up there. Those things make me nervous, and some of them may very well spy. It certainly would give one a feeling of power to be able to fly, and I get that from your poem. Best of luck in the contest. judi
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Wow! You did a great job with this monorhyme. Excellent word choices. You must be one of those drones flying about up there. Those things make me nervous, and some of them may very well spy. It certainly would give one a feeling of power to be able to fly, and I get that from your poem. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 09-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed weekend.
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You're very welcome. Have a wonderful holiday season. judi
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You're very welcome. Have a wonderful holiday season. judi
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written and a good example of how the mono rhyme works it reads very well with great art choice well done good luck regards Jill
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Yes this is well written and a good example of how the mono rhyme works it reads very well with great art choice well done good luck regards Jill
Comment Written 09-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed weekend.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Ine,
Your poem is very nice and also the poem you posted below that was written by Dendrobia or did you write this poem too with a different name? I always like reading your work.
Kat
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Hi Ine,
Your poem is very nice and also the poem you posted below that was written by Dendrobia or did you write this poem too with a different name? I always like reading your work.
Kat
Comment Written 09-Dec-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed weekend. No, that was not me.
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Thanks Ine. Kat
