Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Very lyrical poem. And it's the poetic style. Great flow of the rhyme carried throughout the poem. Nicely done. Well thought out and emotionally wrenching. Great visual imagery created. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely last part of the week.

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi Robina

This is a very good monorhyme, I enjoyed reading it. I is a good contender for the contest. I wish you the very best of luck.

Mary

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. And have a lovely week.

Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written contest entry. Your words flow easily line to line combining and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. And have a lovely week.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I found this to be in interesting form of poetry
you captured my attention first, from the artwork you choose to go with your poem
And it is a perfect match
I love how your words flow.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely Sunday

reply by misscookie on 11-Dec-2016

You're very welcome, take care.
Cookie

Comment from samandlancelot

Excellent

Robina,

I see lots of imagery in your Monorhyme poem. I like your bird's point of view and the laughter that comes from living life from his vantage point of flying near the sky and near the sea. I love how he reminds those who see him that he is not spy.

Well done!

Patricia

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely Sunday

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-I like the image and presentation.
-Good job with the monorhyme.
-It is a fun kind of poem.
-I like all the things you would do,
especially in the conclusion;
not being a spy is my favorite part.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed weekend.

reply by Pam (respa) on 10-Dec-2016

You are welcome, and you do the same.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written monorhyme poem. If we could fly high in the sky it would be a great experience to look down to the earth from above and see things from another perspective.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed weekend.

Comment from pharp

Excellent

I really like your Monorhyme poem. You did an excellent job in the penning of this poem, you have met all the requirement as outlined for this particular style of poetry. Wishing you the very best in the contest. Blessings........Portia

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed weekend.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Ine, very well written Monorhyme form...I just read one of this earlier...was thing if posting one...very well done my sweet friend...and I will wave hi...when you fly by...love your poem...and a beautiful picture....Love ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed weekend.

reply by l.raven on 11-Dec-2016

your so welcome...and you have a wonderful evening...love xxoo

Comment from amada

Excellent

This is a fun work. I like it a lot because of the flying birds, the air, and all your words. i am one of those who would like to have wings. That would be fun!

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed weekend.