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Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "One-Winged Angel"
A delightful Childen Lesson Book.

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Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
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You might want to go back and use your spell
check a few miss spelled words I get that way when I'm trying to write fast. I like the story of Annie oakley very much. boy could she shoot

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2016
    Gotcha t Hi Abby!
    This one was in my casino room and I fell asleep!
    Ricky...
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Hi Ricky I will have to go and read some of your earlier parts, so I can see where this has come from. I can see it's for children though. There was a couple of spelling mistakes, I put them below. Interesting read. :) Sandra

"Did O get that ri(f)ht Ricky?" right
"No Ann(u)e to many 'P's!" Annie

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2016


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016
    Hi Sandra and thanks for the stars!
    "But the grammar errors were intent-
    ional as Annie never went to schoo!
    And Thanks again dear .
    Ricky
    1024.