ONoMAToPOEia
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Comment from rama devi
I enjoyed this because I love the device of onomatopoeia. Great word choices (especially OM)!~ Good form with six syllables descending to one and then six again.
Favorite choices: Om, Tada, Klank!
Enjoyed this whimsical, witty write.
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2016
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I enjoyed this because I love the device of onomatopoeia. Great word choices (especially OM)!~ Good form with six syllables descending to one and then six again.
Favorite choices: Om, Tada, Klank!
Enjoyed this whimsical, witty write.
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 20-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2016
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awe thank you so much for reading this silly little poem! I had fun with it!!
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:-))))
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Susanjohn, you my friend have me confused with a word I can't even pronounce! You did a bang up job putting this together! Well done and what an omgwthidkwyw!!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2016
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Susanjohn, you my friend have me confused with a word I can't even pronounce! You did a bang up job putting this together! Well done and what an omgwthidkwyw!!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2016
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is it ghawk???? hehe i made it up! ;-p
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My letters mean, oh my god what the heck I don't know what you wrote!!
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huh?
Comment from WalkerMan
You did quite well with this, and I like your mostly alliterative choices of words. You should have a good chance in this contest. The description and illustration certainly fit the theme, and I like the way you used capitals for stressed syllables in the title. (You have to wonder how the coiner of that word came up with it....)
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2016
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You did quite well with this, and I like your mostly alliterative choices of words. You should have a good chance in this contest. The description and illustration certainly fit the theme, and I like the way you used capitals for stressed syllables in the title. (You have to wonder how the coiner of that word came up with it....)
Comment Written 03-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2016
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Thanks mike!!
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You're welcome, Susan. -- Mike
Comment from sandy montgomery
This was delighful and so much fun. Exuberant.. Fantastic non traditional presetation. I love it. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2016
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This was delighful and so much fun. Exuberant.. Fantastic non traditional presetation. I love it. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2016
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awe thanks sandy!!!
Comment from RYME4U
Well written and clever. I like the "sound" of this one. Your noises are fresh and original and the presentation is a delight. Very good job!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2016
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Well written and clever. I like the "sound" of this one. Your noises are fresh and original and the presentation is a delight. Very good job!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2016
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This was fun!! thanks for reading and the review!!! :-)))
Comment from DR DIP
A fun write Susan. Onomatopoeia, That's one word i could never spell probably
dong, bang, whizz
are words that I hear
spell like they sound
not always quite clear
Pow , zap, plop
are more words I think
maybe more at the top
I need to see a shrink!
xdip
PS Hope your daughter is ok
dip
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2016
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A fun write Susan. Onomatopoeia, That's one word i could never spell probably
dong, bang, whizz
are words that I hear
spell like they sound
not always quite clear
Pow , zap, plop
are more words I think
maybe more at the top
I need to see a shrink!
xdip
PS Hope your daughter is ok
dip
Comment Written 01-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2016
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you dont need a shrink! hehehe Dip, i had to check the spelling on that stupid word..like 100 times!! OMG...glad you liked this silly little poem. we are home from the hospital.Lilly NEVER complains..she has to be feed clear liquids through a syringe.is so swollen and bruised..see cant move much.I have to brace her head as she has stitches/screws under jaw..it's been tough..but like i said,..she never ever complains.
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sweet wish her all the best
xxdip
Comment from tfawcus
You've had fun with this one! What a rich cacophony of sounds! Somehow, I think this might well be the contest winner. Swish, whizz and bang as you zoom past the finishing post! Good luck!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2016
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You've had fun with this one! What a rich cacophony of sounds! Somehow, I think this might well be the contest winner. Swish, whizz and bang as you zoom past the finishing post! Good luck!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2016
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Thanks Tony!!!
Comment from Mary Wakeford
Clever and lively teacup presentation, Susan. For a minute I thought I was watching a show from the old Batman series!
You've carried out the challenge in a most creative way, the only thing it lacks is the words being centered on the page. Fun!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2016
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Clever and lively teacup presentation, Susan. For a minute I thought I was watching a show from the old Batman series!
You've carried out the challenge in a most creative way, the only thing it lacks is the words being centered on the page. Fun!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2016
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Thank you mary!! much appreciated...I did have fun with this!
Comment from patcelaw
Susan, this is a good teacup poem, but if you would center it on the page it will take on the shape of a teacup. Give it a try ans see how you like it. Patricia
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2016
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Susan, this is a good teacup poem, but if you would center it on the page it will take on the shape of a teacup. Give it a try ans see how you like it. Patricia
Comment Written 01-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2016
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Hi pat!! i think i fixed it!!!
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I really like the teacup format. It looks nice with the change.
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I really like the teacup format. It looks nice with the change.
