Comment from sandy montgomery

Excellent

These are incredibly hard to write. I wroteva short one based on a poem I wrote in my teens. It took 14 frustating hours to get it right. This is Beatiful and so long. Thank you for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

sandy, i'm happy that you enjoyed this one.

Comment from robina1978

Exceptional

Great artwork that complements your poem very well. You wrote a faultless Palindrome. This one is somewhat fairy-like. It sounds great and you fulfilled all the rules. I am sorry you lost your son.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Dear robin, i'm so glad that you enjoyed this poem and I'm grateful for the six-star rating. Thank you for your continued attention to my portfolio. Thank you to the moon and back!

Comment from Abby Wilson-hand

Excellent

I like this write for a few reasons it's just like the six children that I have raised. I had a horse named Luna and the moon is amazing as the sun some people just don't see it

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Hi, Abby - you're right, not everyone sees it. I like the comparison to the six children. Pet Luna for me, won't you?

reply by Abby Wilson-hand on 06-Dec-2016

I will

Comment from rjuselius

Exceptional

i have written two palindrome poems and i can say it isn't an easy task dear jeni! you have made a magical landscape to revolve around fairies and the innocence of children. it works well and i love the mythical element.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

dearest rebekka,

I've no doubt that you had the ability to easily write a palindrome. I really want to write another...I VERY MUCH appreciate the fantastic six-star review, my friend.

To the moon and back!

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Well this is certainly a very well-written and clever piece. I think the second half has a slightly better flow to it but this is impressive.

very tricky but well executed.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Hi, thanks for your review of this poem. I'm sorry that I'm tardy in my response. Your review was very kind and I appreciate your attention to my portfolio!

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

This s a magical, enchanting palindrome which works its spell both coming and going. I enjoy your jumble of imagery from trolls to centaurs. This created a mythic kaleidoscope. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Thank YOU, Sis Cat, for reading the poem and accepting the kaleidoscope. I find that word amazing. Geez.

I appreciate your attention to my writing.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

An excellent example of a difficult style of poetry. There are so many different types of poems. You have chosen one of the toughest and did a great job.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Thanks for the kind review. I've been super busy lately with our dog; she's been ill and is going to the vet tonight.

Thanks for your attention to my writing.

To the Moon and Back!

Comment from Aussie

Excellent

Your presentation complimented your great little poem. Dreams and schemes and flying machines - what do little ones dream about? I loved your poem, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Thanks for the kind review. I've been super busy lately with our dog; she's been ill and is going to the vet tonight.

Thanks for your attention to my writing.

To the Moon and Back!

reply by Aussie on 05-Dec-2016

Hope doggie is OK and wishing you a Happy Christmas! Blessings, Kay.

reply by Aussie on 06-Dec-2016

What happened to your doggie?

Comment from RPSaxena

Exceptional

Hello Luna,
Lovely piece of Fantasy Poetry meeting the desired norms and beautifully depicting its theme while playing with words!
It's really a difficult, but laudable attempt.
Marvelous!

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Thanks for the kind review. I've been super busy lately with our dog; she's been ill and is going to the vet tonight.

Thanks for your attention to my writing.

To the Moon and Back!

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

I would love to comment, to help if there are things that need improving, but I'm afraid this is one form totally beyond me...I've never written a palindrome. BUT, that said, this wouldn't be much of a review if I didn't try, and try I must, for my own SELFISH need to learn! (LOL)

I think each phrase or statement has to be able to be read backwards, as well as how it is written. Yours is about the best explanation of the form I've read - as to the poem you've written, I'm still completely confused, although I will say this: I loved the mystical feel of Mother moon and dreams, the centaurs and trolls, and giggling children - wonderful imagery evoked!

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Thanks for the kind review. I apologize for my tardiness.

Thanks for your attention to my writing.

To the Moon and Back!

reply by Dawn Munro on 05-Dec-2016

My pleasure. :)