Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Nicely done on the king of the jungle the lion, great job on the animal nonet and prompt. Good luck on this well crafted piece and have a great day

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2016

William,

Thank you for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings................

Comment from mbroyles2

Excellent

This is a good contest entry.
The rhymes are easy to follow and the image of a hunting mighty lion is clear.
Excellent pace.
Great job.
Michael

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2016

Thank you for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings................

Comment from Ella25

Excellent

And yes, mighty the lion is. The beast that stalks and preys, to take it apart every day. Well written and I had fun reading it. Thank you for sharing and good luck on your contest. Ella

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 Comment Written 30-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments they are greatly appreciated. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. Blessings......................

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

You give us both the beautiful and the terrifying about the lion. He looks majestic, but is also a skilled killer. Perfect syllable count for the nonet form. Excellent pairing with art and verse. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 30-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2016

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes they are greatly appreciated. Blessings..............