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Dragonflies

Symbol of grace

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Comment from winnona
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A very good contest entry. Your words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2016

reply by the author on 29-Nov-2016
    Thank you very much!
Comment from Poetic Friend
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Ah, those dragonflies! I look forward to summer just to admire their flights, which you eloquently and originally described so well in your poem.

In its brevity, you packed painted images in your poem. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2016

reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
    Thank you for your encouraging comments.
Comment from rama devi
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Superb word economy and phonetics in this well-crafted entry for the contest...which meets all requirements well. Love the medley of S sounds in all lines, plus consonance and alliteration of G and consonance of W and M as well assonance of EE and A
Fine satori line! Maybe us a hyphen? Hang-gliding.


Good luck in the contest.

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2016

reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
    Thank you again for your constructive review!
reply by rama devi on 26-Nov-2016
    Happy to help! :-)))) Thanks!