Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This is a nicely done swap quatrain about love and romance and how we should take it as it comes. It shows how we wish for it on the moon and/or stars and how it should be fought for.
Joan

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2020

Comment from ~Dovey

Excellent

Hi Luna,

You've met your own challenge of setting your line perfectly in the Swap Quatrain form. A cupid poem is sure to draw a lover's eye, and is perfect for the love contest.
I enjoyed all of your excellent rhyming quatrains.

Good Luck!

Kim

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2016

Kim, I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem.

Thanks for your gracious review.

Yours, Luna 🏯❤️❤️

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

An excellent swap quatrain. It is one of my favorite forms, but seldom seen. Probably because it isn't easy to do, You execute it well with creative lines and well thought out rhyming.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016

Thanks so much for reading my work and for this review. I appreciate your attention to my work and I apologize for not replying sooner!

luna

Comment from ronnie k

Excellent

A excellent poem was all I could since I am a grassroot poet but my friend what I missed in correct style I was rewarded with in excellent rytme, beautiful word choice and structure, thank you for sharing this gem.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2016

thank YOU, ronnie, for continuing to review my work and being so generous with your comments. I tried to fan you, but it says I can't until tomorrow!

Thanks for your continued attention to my portfolio!

luna

Comment from crybry67

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this post, it flowed so well. Excellent use of rhyme. I haven't written a swap quatrain, looks like fun so I gotta try. Great job on yours. I like the line 'shuffling the cards of love at play'. Blessings... Christy

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2016

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

Oh that was an awesome flow of romantic poetry my friend. I felt as if I was dancing to a wondrous beat of passion. Great entry for this particular contest.
God bless!
Steve

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2016

Hi, my friend. I'm really happy with this review and sorry for the lateness of the response!

I appreciate your attention to my portfolio!

Comment from RoostyNester

Excellent

A nice swap quatrain poem. Switching of the 1st and 4th line in each quatrain. I loved the sweet love poem. Very moving and insightful. Very well done.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2016

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

The swap poem, I really like that style. Your love poem is really romantic, it is just lovely. I wouldn't mind if my husband had written one like that for me! Well done, my friend, and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2016

Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

Luna's back,

Emotional reflections are insightful and impressive. Emotional reflections are insightful and impressive.

I only spotted one small error, nothing to get too upset about-

These two lines do not rhyme.

'Tis finished, passion shan't rebel.
Announce the day, dear Cupid's bells.

I guess that I wanted to tell you that if two words rhyme and then you add an S to one of them then they no longer rhyme. This means that some of your lines do not rhyme. I am very sorry. There is a rhyming dictionary on the net at rhymezone.com.

Everything else looked picture-perfect.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2016

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

A great example of a very difficult style of writing. I don't know how you can keep track of so many styles. I've heard of a Quatrain, but never a Swap Quatrain.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2016