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Viewing comments for Chapter 57 "I Think Maybe Autumn is Forever"possible selections for inclusion in book project
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Comment from sandy montgomery
This was beautiful. An incredible image carried through out your piece. Just so lovely. Wistful and emotive. One of your best in my opinion. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2016
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This was beautiful. An incredible image carried through out your piece. Just so lovely. Wistful and emotive. One of your best in my opinion. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2016
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Awww. Thanks so much, Sandy. I'm so pleased you liked this one. I did too. :)) mikey
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A beautiful free verse mikey about Autumn and your lines could be taken as the journey of the tree and leaf or our journey through life. The line that resonates most with me
for want of wings the sky remains a dream
lovely read,
cheers,
valda
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A beautiful free verse mikey about Autumn and your lines could be taken as the journey of the tree and leaf or our journey through life. The line that resonates most with me
for want of wings the sky remains a dream
lovely read,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 26-Nov-2016
Comment from nancyjam
A wonderful descriptive free verse. Imaginative
and metaphorical, with mystical tones to make the
reader think and ponder.
Lovely images and and beautiful use of language.Each time I read it I find new meaning. Such a joy to read.
Nancy
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A wonderful descriptive free verse. Imaginative
and metaphorical, with mystical tones to make the
reader think and ponder.
Lovely images and and beautiful use of language.Each time I read it I find new meaning. Such a joy to read.
Nancy
Comment Written 25-Nov-2016
Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, as much as I love Autumn...I love Winter more...but when it is here I love every leaf that falls...every color that shows...every crispy leaf I step on...this is such a magical poem...I love the wording...and the picture...calming...you should have put it in a contest my sweet friend...very nicely written...Love Linda xxoo
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HI Michael, as much as I love Autumn...I love Winter more...but when it is here I love every leaf that falls...every color that shows...every crispy leaf I step on...this is such a magical poem...I love the wording...and the picture...calming...you should have put it in a contest my sweet friend...very nicely written...Love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 25-Nov-2016
Comment from krys123
So beautifully written, Mikey;
-I wish you would've use this poem for the free verse contest for this would been voted for by the committee very heavily.
-Great metaphors and similes are used to interject the imagery with great descriptiveness that is demonstratively and vividly produced and created within indefinitely definitive expressiveness that shares a bed of tranquil eternity.
-The picture that is so relatively supportive to the conceptual theme of your poem.
-Your poem flows like the leaves in the river the flow down it.
-Great imagery and excellent enjambment.
-Thanks for sharing Mikey and take care and have a good one my friend.
Alex
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So beautifully written, Mikey;
-I wish you would've use this poem for the free verse contest for this would been voted for by the committee very heavily.
-Great metaphors and similes are used to interject the imagery with great descriptiveness that is demonstratively and vividly produced and created within indefinitely definitive expressiveness that shares a bed of tranquil eternity.
-The picture that is so relatively supportive to the conceptual theme of your poem.
-Your poem flows like the leaves in the river the flow down it.
-Great imagery and excellent enjambment.
-Thanks for sharing Mikey and take care and have a good one my friend.
Alex
Comment Written 25-Nov-2016
Comment from Ric Myworld
Autumn opens up the door to winter wonderland in my neck of the woods. So beautiful they say, as I slip on the ice and bust my arse, wallowing in the wet and cold of a foot of snow. I don't care what they say, I would rather be at the Baja Cantina in Marina Del Ray, drinking rum and watching the Sunday ballgames. Remembering all the idiots fighting winter back home. Great job. :-)
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Autumn opens up the door to winter wonderland in my neck of the woods. So beautiful they say, as I slip on the ice and bust my arse, wallowing in the wet and cold of a foot of snow. I don't care what they say, I would rather be at the Baja Cantina in Marina Del Ray, drinking rum and watching the Sunday ballgames. Remembering all the idiots fighting winter back home. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 25-Nov-2016
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You have strong powerful description of autumn. I doubt it will last forever here in Texas; maybe a day or two. LOL. Once again you have shared a wonderful poem.
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You have strong powerful description of autumn. I doubt it will last forever here in Texas; maybe a day or two. LOL. Once again you have shared a wonderful poem.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2016
Comment from nordicgirl
Some trees understand mercy...
I adore that stanza. This is another one where the exact meaning may be over my head, but it sure affects me emotionally. So much to yhink about and just so beautiful to read. Wonderful. NG
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Some trees understand mercy...
I adore that stanza. This is another one where the exact meaning may be over my head, but it sure affects me emotionally. So much to yhink about and just so beautiful to read. Wonderful. NG
Comment Written 25-Nov-2016
Comment from dmt1967
This is a very deep poem. I like the blue background and the picture but it is a bit too deep for me to understand. I enjoyed reading it, though, just didn't understand it. Thank you for sharing.
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This is a very deep poem. I like the blue background and the picture but it is a bit too deep for me to understand. I enjoyed reading it, though, just didn't understand it. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2016
Comment from Pantygynt
The thing I really like about this poem is the way the form of the poem emulates the way a stream moves beating this leaf, twisting, turning and undulating in a manner that is impossible to predict and enchanting to be revealed as ithe leaf follows the streams course beneath the sky to the sea. This is gorgeous.
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The thing I really like about this poem is the way the form of the poem emulates the way a stream moves beating this leaf, twisting, turning and undulating in a manner that is impossible to predict and enchanting to be revealed as ithe leaf follows the streams course beneath the sky to the sea. This is gorgeous.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2016