Season's first snow..
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Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Susan, this never came to my inbox, so I will review it in a different way, here goes
*What a delight*
the first snow that fell
when I was young, created
wondrous memories
Susan, because of this great senyru, I travelled back through my memory bank to relive some of the greatest times of my life! Thank you my friend,,,,,,,Jimmy
Remember this *roses are certainly red
and violets will always be blue
and within my heart and head
I will always be thinking about you!!!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2016
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Susan, this never came to my inbox, so I will review it in a different way, here goes
*What a delight*
the first snow that fell
when I was young, created
wondrous memories
Susan, because of this great senyru, I travelled back through my memory bank to relive some of the greatest times of my life! Thank you my friend,,,,,,,Jimmy
Remember this *roses are certainly red
and violets will always be blue
and within my heart and head
I will always be thinking about you!!!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2016
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LOL this is great!!! thanks jim
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi))))))))))))... I've seen it on mountain tops, I've seen on TV... I've seen it depicted in photo's, pictures and paintings... but alas, I have to take your word and joyous memories as gospel for I never had the fortune or privilege to delve into the feel of snow.
But that's not saying I didn't feel it vicariously through your wonderful description... so... all the very best in this contest dear author... yes, a woman's touch... oops, I hope! Sorry if I am wrong.
With our thoughts we create,
the soft patterns of joy.
James vx's.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Hi))))))))))))... I've seen it on mountain tops, I've seen on TV... I've seen it depicted in photo's, pictures and paintings... but alas, I have to take your word and joyous memories as gospel for I never had the fortune or privilege to delve into the feel of snow.
But that's not saying I didn't feel it vicariously through your wonderful description... so... all the very best in this contest dear author... yes, a woman's touch... oops, I hope! Sorry if I am wrong.
With our thoughts we create,
the soft patterns of joy.
James vx's.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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What an awesome review!!!! Thank you so much!!!
Comment from WalkerMan
Yes, for many of us the carefree childhood days of playing in fresh snow are a fond memory. I climbed the mountains of packed snow my father created while clearing the driveway, and slid down the far side into soft snow up to my chin! He had to reach down and pull me out.... (We had a lot of snow there sixty years ago.) Snow is a lot more fun before you realize you have to drive in it. You capture the mood well with this poem.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Yes, for many of us the carefree childhood days of playing in fresh snow are a fond memory. I climbed the mountains of packed snow my father created while clearing the driveway, and slid down the far side into soft snow up to my chin! He had to reach down and pull me out.... (We had a lot of snow there sixty years ago.) Snow is a lot more fun before you realize you have to drive in it. You capture the mood well with this poem.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Children love the snow!....then, well I guess it loses its thrill.. lol!
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Yes, for children, snow is just fun, both to look at and to play in. When you must shovel it for six hours to clear your driveway (as I have done more than once), it does lose its charm. And if it keeps
coming down so fast that you turn around and see little trace of what you cleared, it's disheartening. (That happened to me once on a workday. I went inside and called my manager, and he said not to
worry, they're sending everyone already there back home before they get snowed in at work....) A place about fifty miles east of where I lived once had SEVEN FEET of snow within two days! -- Mike
Comment from RodG
Nice to see how "the season's first snow".affected the Speaker in a positive way. Not me!
Your poem also gives us a picture we can easily visualize.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Nice to see how "the season's first snow".affected the Speaker in a positive way. Not me!
Your poem also gives us a picture we can easily visualize.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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LOL speaking as a child...not looking forward to the snow either! heheheh
Comment from Giggles0630
Indeed reminds the reader of the glee felt in childhood when it snowed for the first time. Makes me look forward to my first snowfall this winter even though I'm an older adult. Lovely short poem.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Indeed reminds the reader of the glee felt in childhood when it snowed for the first time. Makes me look forward to my first snowfall this winter even though I'm an older adult. Lovely short poem.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Thank you for reading.
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Very welcome!!
