Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi June. Congratulations for winning the contest with this well done
Kyrielle. There is only one small typo to correct which is: "dough nut holes" (doughnut holes). Snowy days do prompt snuggliness and cookies. Good job. Marilyn

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016

Thanks for the correction!

reply by BeasPeas on 26-Nov-2016

And congratulations on your win! :)

Comment from Ogden

Excellent

Uh oh! Big competition here! Terrific poem, June. If I didn't have my own comfy cupcake, I think I just might want to be that guy snowed in with you. ;-)
Don

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016

LOL. thank you for your positive feedback!

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This is an excellent, descriptive Kyrielle. I like the bouncy rhythm and the way you set a different scene in each stanza. Great job

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016

Thank you for your kind comments!

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a beautifully written and presented poem. Your syllable count is spot on, your rhyming is good and I love the repeated line at the end of each stanza. Patricia.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016

Glad you enjoyed it!

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

I enjoyed reading and reviewing this great poem you have penned. You used such great descriptive wording and the art work went to well with your poem. Best wishes in the contest! Teri

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016

Thank you so much!