Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

It seems the speaker is suffering from unrequited love. The one she loves is only in her dreams and not it her real life. If her love is so strong why not confront the feelings in the light of day.
Joan

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2020

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

I'm going to agree with your other reviewers.
Please increase the font size.
You're hiding your light under a bushel.
The reason we write is to communicate with our readers.
Don't make it hard.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016

Done!

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

I don't know why but the writing in your poem is so small I can hardly read it. Is it my computer or the FanStory Gremlins?
I like what I can read but it's been tough. I like the repetition (we meet here in our dreams).
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016

Thank you for your very kind review.

I appreciate your kind attention to my work of yours soon. Sorry for the late reply, I've been out of town due to a death in the family.

Comment from robyn corum

Good

Luna,

I THINK this was a really pretty quatern -- but I can't be sure, because my eyesight isn't that great and the font on this HAD to be about a size 8. PLEASE increase the font. I can't imagine you'll get too many reviewers and it's a shame to waste the money you spent to promote this poem! *smile* Good luck!

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016

Thank you for your very kind review.

I appreciate your kind attention to my work of yours soon. Sorry for the late reply, I've been out of town due to a death in the family.

Comment from Writer51

Excellent

This is a very nice poem with an even flow and well chosen words. I don't know what pitch this is in but to make it easier on the eyes, I would use a larger print.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016

Thank you for your very kind review.

I appreciate your kind attention to my work of yours soon. Sorry for the late reply, I've been out of town due to a death in the family.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very good rhyming quatrains with a great meter, reads and flows well, only problem print to small, had to magnify almost twice the size to read this. Thanks for the share and have a great day.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016

Thank you for your very kind review.

I appreciate your kind attention to my work of yours soon. Sorry for the late reply, I've been out of town due to a death in the family.