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On Turkey Day

a week away ...

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Comment from Pantygynt
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Ah! This would appear to put thanksgiving into perspective. What is it you are all giving thanks for anyway? Democracy? Look where that has got you. Trumped.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2016

Comment from ~Dovey
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Hi Starkat,

In light of this November, I'll cast my vote for more pie! lol Nice play on words in this nonet: Pilgrim's progress, guests gobble, etc...

Good luck in the Nonet contest.

Happy Thanksgiving!

Kim

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
    Thanks, Kim - and Happy Thanksgiving to you, too! Glad you enjoyed the word choices and ideas in this nonet. I have to remember to leave room for more pie - as sometimes I'm stuffed. Cheers ... ;o) Art
Comment from Writer51
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I love these holiday poems. They give me such a warm feeling. Like when I was a kid. They bring back a lot of memories for me. Thank you.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
    Glad you enjoyed this nonet and that it brought you some fond memories. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o)
Comment from robyn corum
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Well, that's kind of sad. *smile* I think you summed up the whole Thanksgiving holiday in 45 syllables! HAHAHAHAHA Seriously, this is a fun poem and should do well in the contest! Good luck!

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
    Thanks. Glad you enjoyed this nonet. It is quite a challenge to stuff an entire holiday into 45 silly bells.
    Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o)
Comment from William Ross
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Very good on the nonet and thanksgiving, Nicely done, thanks for the share on this, good luck, should do well, have a wonderful day

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
    Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. Appreciate all your comments. Cheers ... ;o)
Comment from dragonpoet
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Nicely done nonet which shows how most overeat on Thanksgiving. What a beautiful turkey. Looking at it makes me hungry.

Keep writing.

Happy Thanksgiving.

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
    Happy Thanksgiving to you, too! We're having 18 guests this year - lots of overeating next week. Glad you liked this nonet.
    Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o)
reply by dragonpoet on 19-Nov-2016
    You're welcome.

    Cheers.

    dp
Comment from Jackarrie
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Hi
a very good description of a thanksgiving day or it could be a Christmas day to. All syllables are correct. I wish you luck in the contest.
Mary

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
    Thanks. Appreciate all your comments. Cheers ... ;o)
Comment from rspoet
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This is a very good entry for the contest
with correct syllables to the form
Excellent imagery of Thanksgiving
and nice word play with "gobble"
and a touch of history, too
Leave out the politics, just pass the pie
Perfect picture match
Well done
Best wishes for the holiday
and the contest


 Comment Written 18-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
    Thanks for your wonderful, detailed review. Glad you enjoyed this tasty nonet. Appreciate all your comments.
    Cheers ... ;o)
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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I used to hate it when people referred to Thanksgiving as turkey day. Now I'm not so judgemental. Now I say when do we eat? And pass the pie.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
    We eat next Thursday. So far, we have 18 guests for T-Day. There will be many types of pie - pumpkin, mince, pecan and cherry .... so, take your pick. Cheers ... ;o)
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very good nonet poem you have penned about Thanksgiving. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2016


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2016
    Thanks, Teri -- Glad you enjoyed this nonet - its Thanksgiving topic with appropriate word choices and imagery.
    Appreciate all your comments. Cheers ... ;o)