Comment from Giggles0630

Exceptional

I loved reading and rereading this poem!! Evokes longing, and speaks to all of the sense. Only comment is a very minor one: I would add a comma after "behind trees".

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016

Thanks for the review and sparkly stars. I agree and added the comma. Welcome to fanstory, I look forward to sharing our stories, cheers, j

reply by Giggles0630 on 20-Nov-2016

Thank you for the welcoming words! Enjoying it so far!

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Very nice. A great atmospheric read and it even rhymes. Much enjoyed with great description and flow. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2016

I think it would be fun to spy on gypsies. Thanks for the review, cheers, j

reply by frogbook on 18-Nov-2016

I have a novel started that involves such...but like the others, I seem to get half way thru and poop out. Maybe this will get me thinkin again!

Comment from Writer51

Excellent

Very nice. I like the way you intertwined the words in a successful and strong mesh. I felt the dancing and wanted to join in.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2016

I love spying on gypsies, ha ha. Thanks for the review, cheers, j