Dance in the camp ...
... a miracle ... and a true story22 total reviews
Comment from amada
This is such a beautiful story in the power of believing...just have confidence in God's goodness and power. My fave line because of the movement and its force: " I dashed forward into the light, bounding, spinning, ricocheting off log-piles..." There you go...I see it all in my mind. So shall be. Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016
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This is such a beautiful story in the power of believing...just have confidence in God's goodness and power. My fave line because of the movement and its force: " I dashed forward into the light, bounding, spinning, ricocheting off log-piles..." There you go...I see it all in my mind. So shall be. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016
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amada - your encouragement comes at welcome time. My Bud and I travelled from Florida to Oklahoma (took 2 days). On the first day he slipped in a parking lot (he is stubborn about letting anyone help him) and since his arms and upper body are decimated by the ALS) he went backwards and hit his head on the asphalt. Blood went everywhere and he was out for about 30 seconds, then was totally confused about the previous hour's activities. I immediately thought 'concussion' and we rushed to urgent care, where they dug gravel out of his head and insisted we go to a hospital for CT scans. By the time the scans were done he was making more sense when he talked and insisting he was okay, but the confusion and spotty memory continues. He didn't have a concussion but his head has a 4x4 wound and hematoma.
I've been a wreck, but you've made me feel lot's better.
Have a great Thanksgiving. I'll be thanking God for folks like you as well as for the feast.
Relda
Comment from light
I loved this. My daughter dances at these celebrations and I think I it is a great way to worship, but I don't move so easily.
Elaine
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016
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I loved this. My daughter dances at these celebrations and I think I it is a great way to worship, but I don't move so easily.
Elaine
Comment Written 21-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016
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Elaine - Very nice to meet you. How neat to have a dancing daughter. I have 3 sons and they are also rhythm-challenged.
Thank you so much for your comments and encouragement.
I look forward to stopping by your site to see what you're up to.
Relda
Comment from LaRosa
I would have to copy most of this wonderful exercise to point out all that I loved.
An earthly father tries to teach his daughter to dance. Her heavenly father gives her a vision that He will teach her the purity of joyous dance, unfettered, unhindered.
There will be no fear, embarrassment, or shame once the fetters to this world are gone.
"I can see it. Feel it. The rush of released joy: Movement...rising in spontaneous worship - expressing gratitude through grace - lifting praise through abandonment of self"
Exquisitely phrased. The dreamer feels the freedom of celebration of body and life! Then the true dream, the promise of dreams fulfilled, gives a peaceful joy to know she will one day truly 'lift praise' when self is finally abandoned to live on the other side of heaven.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016
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I would have to copy most of this wonderful exercise to point out all that I loved.
An earthly father tries to teach his daughter to dance. Her heavenly father gives her a vision that He will teach her the purity of joyous dance, unfettered, unhindered.
There will be no fear, embarrassment, or shame once the fetters to this world are gone.
"I can see it. Feel it. The rush of released joy: Movement...rising in spontaneous worship - expressing gratitude through grace - lifting praise through abandonment of self"
Exquisitely phrased. The dreamer feels the freedom of celebration of body and life! Then the true dream, the promise of dreams fulfilled, gives a peaceful joy to know she will one day truly 'lift praise' when self is finally abandoned to live on the other side of heaven.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016
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LaRosa - you made me cry tears of joy. It is a joy to write it - but to have someone understand and appreciate it deeply is a reward like no other.
You have blessed me on a day I needed it badly. My Bud, who has ALS, had an accident Monday (head injury - he fell) and it shook me up. He does not have a concussion but he's lost some memory of the day before and is confused about events on the day it happened. He's still insisting on walking by himself - stubborn man.
God bless and my best,
Relda
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Interesting concept and storyline.
Good characterizations used throughout the telling of this story.
Reminds of my adage of "Cast your vote for Jesus. Keep your eyes on Calvary."
And everything else will take care of itself.
What an amazing experience it will be at the "Camp of the Host"!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016
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Interesting concept and storyline.
Good characterizations used throughout the telling of this story.
Reminds of my adage of "Cast your vote for Jesus. Keep your eyes on Calvary."
And everything else will take care of itself.
What an amazing experience it will be at the "Camp of the Host"!
Comment Written 20-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016
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Hi, Brett - if I don't meet you on this side, I'll look you up in Heaven. What a day of rejoicing!
God bless and my best,
Relda
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Very good, and unusual. Nice to see something fresh for a change. I like that you didn't wake up knowing how to dance. But you knew you would dance eventually in Heaven, and that's more than enough. :)
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016
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Very good, and unusual. Nice to see something fresh for a change. I like that you didn't wake up knowing how to dance. But you knew you would dance eventually in Heaven, and that's more than enough. :)
Comment Written 20-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016
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Phyllis - thank you for the encouragement and your insight. Faith is all about believing without sight. God is very pleased when we have faith.
If we never meet in person on this side, I'll look you up there!
God bless and my best,
Relda
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This is a very well written, hopeful and emotive post which I am sure many will be able to relate to. It is a fine testament to your faith.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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Hi there,
This is a very well written, hopeful and emotive post which I am sure many will be able to relate to. It is a fine testament to your faith.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 19-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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GMG - you encouragement is much appreciated. Oh to day, when our 'eyes of faith' see!
God bless and my best,
Relda
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a fabulous story! I am sure we will all realise our hopes and dreams when we all meet up in Heaven. To dance, that was always my dream and I did for a short while. I am glad you've got yourself a date with the best teacher you could possibly have. How wonderful! :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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What a fabulous story! I am sure we will all realise our hopes and dreams when we all meet up in Heaven. To dance, that was always my dream and I did for a short while. I am glad you've got yourself a date with the best teacher you could possibly have. How wonderful! :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 19-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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Sandra - Such wonderful encourage! I look forward to taking my place in the great Chorus Line.
God bless and my best.
Relda
Comment from rjuselius
this is an intriguing piece of literature dear relda! i think that you achieved to describe your emotions well on the art of dance and yet again the help of christ as he sees fit.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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this is an intriguing piece of literature dear relda! i think that you achieved to describe your emotions well on the art of dance and yet again the help of christ as he sees fit.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 19-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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Rebekka - thanks for your encouragement. Another thing I want/need to do is write. And, of course, be read! That prayer is also being answered.
Thanks to you.
Relda
Comment from Quantum Traveler
You might not be able to Dance the Dance Relda...But...When it comes to Dancing...you Dance a Very Fine Line with Pen and Ink.
You have the Vision and Circuitry of an Electrified Brain that allows you to Dance with the Heart and Soul of Literary Excellence...Where Others Stumble and Fall.
When you are in tune with the other side answers and miracles always come in the night...I have many.
I keep pad and pen on my night stand for the writings of the night...I'm sure you know about those types of writings.
A writing of Non-Fiction is good for the Soul and a well written piece of Genealogy.
Nicely Written Relda...Quantum Traveler...Phil.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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You might not be able to Dance the Dance Relda...But...When it comes to Dancing...you Dance a Very Fine Line with Pen and Ink.
You have the Vision and Circuitry of an Electrified Brain that allows you to Dance with the Heart and Soul of Literary Excellence...Where Others Stumble and Fall.
When you are in tune with the other side answers and miracles always come in the night...I have many.
I keep pad and pen on my night stand for the writings of the night...I'm sure you know about those types of writings.
A writing of Non-Fiction is good for the Soul and a well written piece of Genealogy.
Nicely Written Relda...Quantum Traveler...Phil.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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Phil - I am honored by your encourage. Took a while to read your comments through. My eyes kept choking up and I had tears in my throat. Your review means a lot.
Also, I'm glad to meet you. I'll stop by your site soon to see what you're up to. I have a feeling we have a lot in common.
God bless and my best,
Relda
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You have a Great Spirit that Flies Beyond the Known.
I will stop by for some more reads.
I enjoyed your writing very much...Q.T...Phil.
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Hi Relda,
What a lovely free-spirited write this is!! I could easily envision you dancing with pure joy and fluidity of movement. Even if it was just a dream, your prayers were answered, and you got to dance.
"Familiar voices shouted encouragement and called my name" ... I love this line! It confirms the belief that once we go to heaven that we are reconnected with loved ones who passed on before us.
Loved your write, and I love your choice of picture to complement it.
Very nice, Relda!
Connie
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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Hi Relda,
What a lovely free-spirited write this is!! I could easily envision you dancing with pure joy and fluidity of movement. Even if it was just a dream, your prayers were answered, and you got to dance.
"Familiar voices shouted encouragement and called my name" ... I love this line! It confirms the belief that once we go to heaven that we are reconnected with loved ones who passed on before us.
Loved your write, and I love your choice of picture to complement it.
Very nice, Relda!
Connie
Comment Written 18-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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Connie - thank you for your encouragement. It will be a perpetual family reunion.
Aren't we glad that Jesus loves us warts and all?
Regards,
Relda
