Comment from
royowen
After being subject to the maladies and cares of this earth, wouldn't it be so nice to step into Heaven, and escape it all unfortunately or fortunately we need to walk up in Jesus' shoes and learn to depend on the separation that He affords in Christ. Well done, good little plot, I like the portal, sort of like stargate!,well done, good write, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 16-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
Roy,
Thanks for your ever encouraging comments!
Peter
reply by royowen on 20-Nov-2016
Comment from
ElegantButler
A wonderfully touching portrait of a multi-generational family with a wonderfully unexpected but beautiful ending. I really like the way the family is portrayed. I could feel the Christmas spirit as they joined together for the holiday. The ending caught me off guard.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
Hi,
Thank you for your encouraging words.
Peter