In the Mirror
What do you see....3 total reviews
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Very good entry into the Mirror contest. So true...every word of it. Last line is excellent!!!!!! I wish you best of luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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Very good entry into the Mirror contest. So true...every word of it. Last line is excellent!!!!!! I wish you best of luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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It's very flattering that you appreciated my poem," In the Mirror," Susanne, especially since no one but I voted for it! Thank you for letting me know. I thought it was pretty good, too.
Don
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Ogden (Don) screw everyone else. It was very good and should have placed. Forgive me. I couldn't vote as I was flat on my back with back injury! God bless and hugs, Susanne
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Glad to see you're back off your back, Susanne.
I really appreciate your speaking up for my poem.
It feels good to have my own opinion validated.
Don
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You are very welcome, Ogden!~
Comment from tfawcus
Some wise words here. Mirrors certainly have their limitations. There are better ways to judge one's image. True beauty lies much deeper than can be captured by a mere reflection.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016
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Some wise words here. Mirrors certainly have their limitations. There are better ways to judge one's image. True beauty lies much deeper than can be captured by a mere reflection.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016
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Exactly! Thanks for the prose version, Tony!
Comment from fuma khan
what a writing! You have written it wonderfully. Everything has been clearly explicated from the beginning, the introduction, the middle and the well-closed ending. One thing I would like to add or rather I would suggest you that you should use more appropriate terms that are relevant to your subject matter. But overall it has a good flow of thoughts and is really commendable.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016
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what a writing! You have written it wonderfully. Everything has been clearly explicated from the beginning, the introduction, the middle and the well-closed ending. One thing I would like to add or rather I would suggest you that you should use more appropriate terms that are relevant to your subject matter. But overall it has a good flow of thoughts and is really commendable.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016
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Thank you for your lavish compliments in reviewing my poem, "In the Mirror," Fuma. It's very pleasing to me that you think it "written wonderfully," and that "everything has been clearly explicated from the beginning, the introduction, the middle and the well-closed ending."
In light of those comments, you couldn't possibly have intended to give it a disparaging two-star rating. As you must know, fewer than five stars is considered unfavorable by FS writers, except for beginners.
Fortunately, editing reviews is easy, by accessing a piece again, and revising the original, which is shown again. I trust that you will decide to do that.