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We Didn't Need All That Life Insuran

(My wife cooks all my meals, and I don't trust her)

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Comment from BeasPeas
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Oh my. I can identify with this. I hate diets. I love food. I can vouch for the fact that a partner cannot control what the other one puts in his/her mouth. Marilyn

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2016

reply by the author on 10-Nov-2016
    cWho likes diets? I agree, food is great! But can you identify with a wife perhaps undermining her heavily-insured husband's heart-healthy diet? Hmm?
    Don
reply by BeasPeas on 10-Nov-2016
    Yes, I can imagine a wife trying to hasten the demise of her overweight husband by sabotaging his diet so she can get his insurance money.

    Vice versa--how about the scenario when a hubby complains about his wife's weight, but then when she starts looking really good he sabotages her diet so no other men will admire her?

    Different set of circumstances, but still torpedoing the diet.
Comment from RYME4U
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Well written with lots of clever wit . I like the rhyming and the even flow of words. The presentation is attractive (and scary)Good luck.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2016

reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016
    Thank you again! I always appreciate your generous comments, RHYME4U!!
Comment from Ryn
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Your poem concerning not needing life insurance. Is quick, cleaver, witty and fun. You have a unique style. Have you considered stand up comedy!

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2016

reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
    Aw shucks! You've got me bushing under my beard, Ryn, you flatterer! Those are some of my most favorite adjectives when they're used to describe my work (except when "not" is in the sentence).

    Actually, I did think about a stand-up routine when I was much younger and better at standing up. My work usually is quirky, with attempts at jocularity. You might want to check out my portfolio, unless you're fond of The Donald.

    Thanks for your compliments! I admire your insight! ;-)
Comment from oliver818
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I enjoyed your poem. It's very true, eating is so much more fun than not eating, but being fat sucks too. Sometimes you just can't win. Thanks for sharing and have a great day!

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2016

reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
    I'm glad you liked it, Oliver! I guess you'll be more circumspect now about what your wife is feeding you.
    Bon Appetit!