Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is very nicely composed and illustrated. Tranquil. Your
word choices continue the mood of the piece and they work
well together. A great entry for the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016

Thanks, Marilyn! I appreciate the compliments!
Don

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

Neat picture and so Fallish, seasonal appropriate I mean. You did a very nice job penning this Lune as well. There is a lot of talent in this. It shows.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016

Thanks for the compliments, Angie. You're very kind.

Comment from winnona

Excellent

a nicely written lune poem contest entry. Your words flowed well line to line combining and forming the message of the poem to the reader. Very nicely chosen artwork and background color they completed the piece well.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016

Thank you, Winnona, for your much appreciated review!

Comment from evesayshi

Excellent

In my opinion, an artfully observant poem - who hasn't seen the mystery of the raven against a night sky - well constructed, in complete compliance with the prompt...

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016

Thank you so much for your insightful review, Eve!

reply by evesayshi on 02-Nov-2016

You are very welcome...

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Very striking indeed is the pose of a raven or even a crow. I like the choice of color as it also echoes the autumnal theme. The raven does have such a mysterious aura and it does evoke an autumn picture.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016

Thank you for for your complimentary and very encouraging review, Lyenochka!