Comment from fluffnstuff

Excellent

very nice haiku i do say...yes...why is it so hard to not be something that has no price on it? the world is getting very sad these days 8 feel. like the song TRY A LITTLE TENDERNESS...or WHAT THE WORLD NEEDS NOW IS LOVE SWEET LOVE. the picture you chose goes well with the write. taketh care fluff

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very wise comments. Lord knows "What the world needs now is love sweet love." I certainly will be praying for some! Blessings my friend...............Portia

Comment from Patricia Crandall

Excellent

This is a simple poem with good advice. The world needs kindness and in a few words you have brought this need to light. The artwork is beautiful and compliments the lune poem. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2016

Patricia,
Thank you for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings...........Portia