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Eternal Life

Wrapped Refrain

16 total reviews 
Comment from Quantum Traveler
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Our discussion today in Church was Matthew...5:3-12 The Beatitudes the Pronouncements in the Sermon on the Mount.
The Happiness in Christ is Eternal Life.
This writing goes well for the closing of a good day.
Well Done Portia...Quantum Traveler...Phil.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2016
    Phil,

    Thank so much for your review and comments; somehow God always gives us confirmation of the truth of His word. Thanks so much my friend and have a wonderful day. Blessings..................Portia
reply by Quantum Traveler on 31-Oct-2016
    Have an Awesome Week Portia You are Amazing...Q.T...Phil.
Comment from Marykelly
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There is an intensity to the message of this poem and that message is to follow the teachings of Christ and not live in a sinful state and above all don't die in a sinful state.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2016
    Marykelly,

    Thank you for your review and very wise comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings and have a wonderful day.........Portia
Comment from Dean Kuch
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There is no way to the Father but through Christ, our Lord and Savior, Portia.
You say it so much more poetically in your lovely poem than I just did in my review.
Nicely done...
~Dean

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2016
    Dean,

    Thank you for your review and very wise comments. Blessings and have a wonderful day. Portia
Comment from ronnie k
Exceptional
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The word of God read are spoken moves mountain, hearing the praise of the oh so worthy savior in the beauty of poetry is so delighting, the rhyme pattern is as close to perfect as one can come, now dear friend I can rest, LOL.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2016
    Ronnie,

    This outstanding review brightens up my day. Thank you for your continued support, six star rating and kindness. Blessings my friend. Portia
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes this is well written with a very good message enclosed for the reader we do not know when the end of our lives will be but we should be prepared well-done regards Jill

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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2016
    Thank you for your review, very kind and wise comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings................Portia
Comment from Rhonni
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I love your message sister in Christ! Your poem flows with rhyme and rhythm and word choice is terrific. Praise be to God, you have a way with words!

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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2016
    Rhonni,

    Thank you my sister in Christ! Your review and very kind comments are greatly appreciated. Blessings and have a wonderful day. Portia