Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes this 5/7/5 prompts us to reflect on the world that lies 'beyond' our earthly eyes and consider what else life may hold at its enigmatic core

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016

Thanks so much for your review , rating and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings..............Portia

Comment from LaRosa

Excellent

This is a simple, straight forward, innocent at heart poem.
The "joy in my heart" evokes the emotion it expresses in the reader.
I love looking to heaven yearning to see God draws a picture in this reader's mind that is not unlike the picture attached to the poem
Well done

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016

Thanks so much for your review, rating and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings........Portia