And She Appeared
a romantic fantasy34 total reviews
Comment from foxangie123
When one reads this it is so full of warmth and passion. It is very lovely my friend. The picture is so perfect with the words. Wish I had six stars to give it.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
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When one reads this it is so full of warmth and passion. It is very lovely my friend. The picture is so perfect with the words. Wish I had six stars to give it.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
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And you, foxangie, for the glowing review. As is often the case with me, the picture inspired the poem. Rod
Comment from Dean Kuch
This is a very lovely, well composed Quatrain poem, Rod. Each of your four rhyming quatrains featured a smooth, even meter when read aloud.
The story it conveys is one of love at first glance, not all too uncommon an occurrence for some.
This should be a formidable entry in the contest.
I wish you the very best of luck.
~Dean
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
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This is a very lovely, well composed Quatrain poem, Rod. Each of your four rhyming quatrains featured a smooth, even meter when read aloud.
The story it conveys is one of love at first glance, not all too uncommon an occurrence for some.
This should be a formidable entry in the contest.
I wish you the very best of luck.
~Dean
Comment Written 30-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
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Hi Dean. Always a pleasure to hear from you. I truly appreciate your high marks for this one. Thank you. Rod
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It was entirely my pleasure, Rod. You're very welcome.
~Dean
Comment from Chrissy710
Nice to read and good content with easy rhyme and flow I liked this and wish you well for the contest. A simple yet very readable poem. good quantrains with a story Cheers Christine
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Nice to read and good content with easy rhyme and flow I liked this and wish you well for the contest. A simple yet very readable poem. good quantrains with a story Cheers Christine
Comment Written 30-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
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Thank you very much, Christine, for your kind praise. Rod
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You are welcome
Comment from Daniel Silverhawk
I'm not familiar with the term kimset , but I am familiar with the setting, having resolved to staying single and playing the field with mo regrets, love has sought him out and found him when he least expected it.
I thoroughly enjoyed this poem.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
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I'm not familiar with the term kimset , but I am familiar with the setting, having resolved to staying single and playing the field with mo regrets, love has sought him out and found him when he least expected it.
I thoroughly enjoyed this poem.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
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I am delighted you enjoyed my poem so much. Rod
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like the artwork very much.
-Presentation is good.
-Your quatrain is written well with
good rhyme, imagery, and progression of ideas.
-For the first half, you are determined to remain a bachelor.
-Then she appeared!
-I think that is the case in a lot of instances.
-I like your conclusion.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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-I like the artwork very much.
-Presentation is good.
-Your quatrain is written well with
good rhyme, imagery, and progression of ideas.
-For the first half, you are determined to remain a bachelor.
-Then she appeared!
-I think that is the case in a lot of instances.
-I like your conclusion.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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Ah, Pam, you know the way to a poet's heart. Thank you so much for this wonderful review. Rod
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You are welcome for the review, and thanks for the compliment.
Comment from rspoet
A fine quatrain poem written beautifully to the form
with excellent rhymes in the ABAB pattern
and silky iambic tetrameter
there is a smooth lilt and grace in your words
Excellent story and art work to match
Very nicely done
I've no sixes left
so I must give a five
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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A fine quatrain poem written beautifully to the form
with excellent rhymes in the ABAB pattern
and silky iambic tetrameter
there is a smooth lilt and grace in your words
Excellent story and art work to match
Very nicely done
I've no sixes left
so I must give a five
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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I could not be more delighted--or flattered--by your response to my poem. Thank you so much. Rod
Comment from Susanjohn
OH how sweet is this!!!! This very yummy story!!! love it..my goodness...ok favorite line...
My heart stood still; it had no choice
when she bestowed on me her smile.
love it..enjoyed reading! :-)
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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OH how sweet is this!!!! This very yummy story!!! love it..my goodness...ok favorite line...
My heart stood still; it had no choice
when she bestowed on me her smile.
love it..enjoyed reading! :-)
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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Susan, you are so kind and I truly appreciate your response to my poem. Rod
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well I liked it!! :-) you're welcome.
Comment from Alan K Pease
Excellent quatrain, "As She Appeared," featuring that mysterious surprise that comes in a lifetime when one finds themselves in the midst of kismet. Lovely quatrains with excellent rhyme, rhythm, alliteration and enjambment all poetic delights.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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Excellent quatrain, "As She Appeared," featuring that mysterious surprise that comes in a lifetime when one finds themselves in the midst of kismet. Lovely quatrains with excellent rhyme, rhythm, alliteration and enjambment all poetic delights.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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Thank you, Alan, for your wonderful response to my poem. Rod
Comment from livelylinda
RodG: oh, you men with hard, hard heart (or something). You think you cannot be felled but it only takes the right moment and the right woman to bring you to your knees. This poem is beautifully written with great rhythm and rhyme. Very nice job. livelylinda
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RodG: oh, you men with hard, hard heart (or something). You think you cannot be felled but it only takes the right moment and the right woman to bring you to your knees. This poem is beautifully written with great rhythm and rhyme. Very nice job. livelylinda
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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Linda, I love your response to my romantic fantasy. Thank you so much for the kind words and all those stars. Rod
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
RodG, I wish that I had a six left! Actually, it is worth much more! Great flow and the most excellent rhyme scheme for a very enjoyable read. I wish you well in this quatrain poetry writing prompt! Well done,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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RodG, I wish that I had a six left! Actually, it is worth much more! Great flow and the most excellent rhyme scheme for a very enjoyable read. I wish you well in this quatrain poetry writing prompt! Well done,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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Thank you, Jim, for the very kind praise and the virtual six. I am delighted you enjoyed my romantic fantasy. Rod