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Halloween haiku(contest entry)

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Comment from Mastery
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Hi, Steve. Long time since I've seen a post from you? This is a true gem, my friend. I would go so far as to say that if you don't win the contest it will be as Trump says "rigged." LOL...Bravo! Great entry. Bob

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2016

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
    Wow! Thank you for the awesome review Bob~! I fear that since the authors names are available to the public that the popularity votes (electoral lol) will be cast accordingly.
    God bless!
    Steve
reply by Mastery on 26-Oct-2016
    You have my vote. btw. I have a chapter posted now...(wink)
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
    I read this chapter a little while ago as I was trying to catch up on my messages lol. Great piece, but awful sad!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
    I have been through the ringer this year and am looking forward to an easier future. The floods were devastating in my area and my home and possessions paid the price. 5 months later I am about to move back into an empty house. I had no flood insurance and FEMA took no interest in helping me. God has provided the help necessary to rebuild my life as he often does.
    God bless my friend. I certainly hope I'm able to get back into the swing of fanstory often.
Comment from Susanjohn
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Disemboweled gourds!!!!! :-((((((( I'll never look at a carved pumpkin the same way!!!! oh my goodness... heheheeh ..that is quite clever!!!

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2016

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
    LOL! Well i suppose this may be a little mind altering. Thank you for the awesome review my friend.
    God bless!
    Steve
Comment from BeasPeas
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So true last line: "disemboweled gourds." Good third line.

First two lines set the stage and are excellent. A good entry
for the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2016

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
    Thank you Marilyn for another awesome review my friend.
    God bless!
    Steve
Comment from ronnie k
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Not much for gourds but I am a fan of good poetry, the poem did the job, of a few
words, it truly speaks a thousand words, thank you..

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2016

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
    Wow! Thank you for the awesome review Ronnie.
    God bless!
    Steve
Comment from Pantygynt
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Your satori is the clue I've been looking for wondering why they all look so evil. Not a happy one in sight. Well of course it is obvious now. The've been disembowelled. That's enough to make even a gourd grimce.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2016

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
    LOL! I always enjoy reading your awesome reviews my friend, thank you.
    God bless!
    Steve
Comment from Ric Myworld
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I don't usually read and vote on many of the contests. Embarrassingly it's true, as we should all read and vote on every contest that our time will allow. I'm going to do better in the future, because I know how few do vote. How different the results would be many times if we did vote. Thanks for sharing another of your fine poems. This one is a definite winner to me. :-)

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2016

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
    I agree Ric! I will certainly make the effort to do so from this point on as well. Thank you for the awesome review.
    God bless!
    Steve
Comment from foxangie123
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Excellent. Great and really unique, brilliant writing and thinking on this one indeed. I could read it over and over. So very clever friend.ð???

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2016

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
    Wow! What a compliment this awesome review is my friend. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
    God bless!
    Steve
Comment from Richard J
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WOW!
Talk about gory details and visuals ... this one has it all.
Fantastic photo, too, setting the mood for a poetic shiver!
I like how you've dubbed pumpkins "Halloween mascots" (kick the apostrophe out), and "disemboweled"(?) ... sheer genuis!

This one should easily take top honors (it has my vote) ... way to go! ~ Richard : )

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2016

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
    I struggle with those darned apostrophes. Thank you for the awesome review Richard.
    God bless!
    Steve
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Halloween haiku. Those scary pumpkin faces will keep me away from the front door. I know it's just a pumpkin, still scares me.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2016

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
    LOL! Right! I am not a fan of the dark house with only the pumpkin for light!
    God bless!
    Steve
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
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The objective correlative of the poem reminishes an Halloween night in session.The work earns its texture from the use of imager.Excellent work!Bravo!

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 Comment Written 26-Oct-2016

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
    Thank you Lloyd for the awesome review my friend.
    God bless!
reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 26-Oct-2016
    Remain Blessed!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
    Most certainly!