Halloween mascots
Halloween haiku(contest entry)61 total reviews
Comment from barkingdog
I'm sorry that I missed this one. I should keep checking your port. I'm fascinated by your easy to read haiku with clear imagery. With many others I have to invoke a psychic power to translate.
Disemboweled gourds as Halloween mascots is a very clear and chilling image.
Congratulations on your win.
:) e
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
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I'm sorry that I missed this one. I should keep checking your port. I'm fascinated by your easy to read haiku with clear imagery. With many others I have to invoke a psychic power to translate.
Disemboweled gourds as Halloween mascots is a very clear and chilling image.
Congratulations on your win.
:) e
Comment Written 30-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2016
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LOL! invoke a psychic power! I understand this my friend. Thank you for another awesome review with congrats.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from jmdg1954
Halloween mascots
litter every porch and lawn
Disemboweled gourds
I really like the last line, disemboweled gourds.
Actually I enjoyed all lines in your poem. They flowed and mirrored each together.
Nicely done... Congrats on the ribbon. John
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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Halloween mascots
litter every porch and lawn
Disemboweled gourds
I really like the last line, disemboweled gourds.
Actually I enjoyed all lines in your poem. They flowed and mirrored each together.
Nicely done... Congrats on the ribbon. John
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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Thank you for the awesome review John! I love this time of the year and certainly enjoyed all of the reviews this piece produced.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from tfawcus
Oh, gourd! I'm not sure I have the stomach for this! Such macabre goings on in preparation for All Hallows Eve. It quite makes the blood run cold. Congratulations on your win in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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Oh, gourd! I'm not sure I have the stomach for this! Such macabre goings on in preparation for All Hallows Eve. It quite makes the blood run cold. Congratulations on your win in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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LOL! Thank you Tony for the awesome review and congrats. Oh gourd has me in stitches.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from nancyrabbrose
I like the way you said "litter every lawn"; also, the description of gourds is good. Well done. You chose just the right words to make a superior Halloween haiku.
Indeed, the illustration works well for your piece.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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I like the way you said "litter every lawn"; also, the description of gourds is good. Well done. You chose just the right words to make a superior Halloween haiku.
Indeed, the illustration works well for your piece.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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Thank you Nancy, I had a blast with this one!
God bless!
Steve
Comment from seaglass
Very nice presentation of picture, poem and color scheme here. I guess we do torture our pumpkins as we celebrate the end of autumn, death and rest of coming winter. But at our house we roast the seeds after disemboweling them.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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Very nice presentation of picture, poem and color scheme here. I guess we do torture our pumpkins as we celebrate the end of autumn, death and rest of coming winter. But at our house we roast the seeds after disemboweling them.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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Pumpkin pie on this end! Thank you for the awesome review,.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I love it. A perfect haiku with the aaahhh line that was exceptional.
Loved the disemboweled gourds, so true. Very well done
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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I love it. A perfect haiku with the aaahhh line that was exceptional.
Loved the disemboweled gourds, so true. Very well done
Comment Written 28-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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Thank you Barb! Almost every review commented on the disemboweled gourds lol.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well. Your artwork and background color completed the poem well. good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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A well-written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well. Your artwork and background color completed the poem well. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 28-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2016
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Thank you for the awesome review Winnona.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great image and good presentation.
-Format is good.
-I like the idea of "Halloween mascots."
-Connection between lines one and two is good.
-I like the satori-- very creative.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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-Great image and good presentation.
-Format is good.
-I like the idea of "Halloween mascots."
-Connection between lines one and two is good.
-I like the satori-- very creative.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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Thank you Pam for the awesome review.
God bless!
Steve
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You must have been sitting right there on the computer; that was the fastest reply I've gotten! You are very welcome and deserving of the review.
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LOL! I happened to be at that particular time. If I had my way, this is where I would be all day.
God bless!
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I see that you won the contest--Congratulations. You had a very good entry.
Thanks for the reply.
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Now I understand the recent reply; I couldn't figure out how it related to the poem! You are very welcome for the review.
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LOL!
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Thank you! I am excited to pull this off!
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You are welcome. Hope you do!
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Comment from rspoet
A solid entry for the Halloween haiku contest
with exact syllables at 5-7-5
Excellent imagery in the porch/lawn and gourds
with very good grammatical connection
and a fine Halloween satori line
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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A solid entry for the Halloween haiku contest
with exact syllables at 5-7-5
Excellent imagery in the porch/lawn and gourds
with very good grammatical connection
and a fine Halloween satori line
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 28-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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Thank you rspoet for this awesome and inspiring review my friend.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from mermaids
Your last line "disemboweled gourds" is chilling. It gives the poem an eery feeling.
Excellent use of words and lines that connect smoothly to form a clear scene and feel of Halloween.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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Your last line "disemboweled gourds" is chilling. It gives the poem an eery feeling.
Excellent use of words and lines that connect smoothly to form a clear scene and feel of Halloween.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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Thank you Mermaids for this awesome review my friend.
God bless!
Steve
