Kona State Of Mind
Run Away and Hide16 total reviews
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Hi ATK I guess in life that all of us have those days where we just want to disappear get away from it all, don't talk to anyone, don't look at anyone, don't smile anyone just be invisible, I have those days every now and then
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Hi ATK I guess in life that all of us have those days where we just want to disappear get away from it all, don't talk to anyone, don't look at anyone, don't smile anyone just be invisible, I have those days every now and then
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
Comment from Dorinda Palmisano
Your rhyme reminds me of the old masters. What a wonderful cadence there is to your poem. So easy to read, so musical. A lovely story in a sweet song. Thank you for sharing your gift. Dorinda
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Your rhyme reminds me of the old masters. What a wonderful cadence there is to your poem. So easy to read, so musical. A lovely story in a sweet song. Thank you for sharing your gift. Dorinda
Comment Written 10-Apr-2018
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Kona State of Mind, fills me with a little grief as I think that you would leave paradise seeking something better. Turn around right now and go back. Find another island.
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This poem, Kona State of Mind, fills me with a little grief as I think that you would leave paradise seeking something better. Turn around right now and go back. Find another island.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
Comment from Day Z Chayn
I guess this means you can run away to Kona in order to locate your rainbow there. Perhaps you could ask the Hawaiian goddess Pele for help, but you may need to watch a few sunrises or sunsets in the shadows of some volcano.
Not sure if Jim Morrison or Jimmy Buffet ought to join you on the plane, but this poem seems reminisceny of both those singer-songwriters
~Shane~
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I guess this means you can run away to Kona in order to locate your rainbow there. Perhaps you could ask the Hawaiian goddess Pele for help, but you may need to watch a few sunrises or sunsets in the shadows of some volcano.
Not sure if Jim Morrison or Jimmy Buffet ought to join you on the plane, but this poem seems reminisceny of both those singer-songwriters
~Shane~
Comment Written 11-May-2017
Comment from suep
Good rhyming and rhythm. Your poem conveys a deep sense of sadness. I'm sure many can relate to this as we've all gone through times in our lives when we've just wanted to runaway and hide. I love how you open and close with sitting at the airport, suitcase by your side. A compelling read that draws one in. When we're in the middle of storms of life they seem like they'll never break, but they do ... keep looking for that rainbow, it's there! Nice work. Thank you for sharing! Sue P. :)
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Good rhyming and rhythm. Your poem conveys a deep sense of sadness. I'm sure many can relate to this as we've all gone through times in our lives when we've just wanted to runaway and hide. I love how you open and close with sitting at the airport, suitcase by your side. A compelling read that draws one in. When we're in the middle of storms of life they seem like they'll never break, but they do ... keep looking for that rainbow, it's there! Nice work. Thank you for sharing! Sue P. :)
Comment Written 11-Feb-2017
Comment from judiverse
Dear Abby says Get a Life. Stop traveling to search for some illusive someone or other, some hopeless dream. Make the best of what you find in LA and stop running. Besides, travel can be expensive. You do an excellent job of creating mood, and the rhyme is excellent. judi
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Dear Abby says Get a Life. Stop traveling to search for some illusive someone or other, some hopeless dream. Make the best of what you find in LA and stop running. Besides, travel can be expensive. You do an excellent job of creating mood, and the rhyme is excellent. judi
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Friend good to see you back and posted a very sentimental poem about searching for your rainbow and traveling on trains to find a friendly face.
Gert
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Hello Friend good to see you back and posted a very sentimental poem about searching for your rainbow and traveling on trains to find a friendly face.
Gert
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
Comment from Louise Michelle
I enjoyed reading this - it could easily be the words to a country/western song.
I can easily see this dude going from airport to airport, running away, but never really getting anywhere.
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I enjoyed reading this - it could easily be the words to a country/western song.
I can easily see this dude going from airport to airport, running away, but never really getting anywhere.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
Comment from misscookie
I like the words to your poem
I bet many members can relate
It's sad to be in a new town and not one friendly face around.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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I like the words to your poem
I bet many members can relate
It's sad to be in a new town and not one friendly face around.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017
Comment from country ranch writer
Chasing a rainbow can be like wishing on a star.Somethings are just not meant to be.we can't always have things turning out how we want it too.
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Chasing a rainbow can be like wishing on a star.Somethings are just not meant to be.we can't always have things turning out how we want it too.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2017