A once cold soul
Sonnet contest entry9 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written sonnet. True love can make the coldest soul to warm up and start to feel emotions towards another that are good and makes us feel alive.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
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A very well-written sonnet. True love can make the coldest soul to warm up and start to feel emotions towards another that are good and makes us feel alive.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
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I agree Sandra! Thank you for the awesome review my friend.
God bless!
Comment from Richard J
I perceive this amazingly-rendered Sonnet as a work of true romance, composed with deeply gratifying emotion, and (to my mind's-eye) precisely what being in-love should be ... an exemplary description of what "love is blind" feels like when the heart sees deeper and purer than the eye ever will.
A beautiful ending always blesses something wonderful inside of me ... warmest hugs 'n happy smiles to you! ~ Richard : )
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
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I perceive this amazingly-rendered Sonnet as a work of true romance, composed with deeply gratifying emotion, and (to my mind's-eye) precisely what being in-love should be ... an exemplary description of what "love is blind" feels like when the heart sees deeper and purer than the eye ever will.
A beautiful ending always blesses something wonderful inside of me ... warmest hugs 'n happy smiles to you! ~ Richard : )
Comment Written 25-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
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Thank you Richard for taking the time to review my work with such wonderful depth my friend.
God bless!
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Always, it's my pleasure, Fellow Texas Poet! : )
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Awesome! Near Houston here!
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The joy was mine ... an Olde Native Houstonite. : )
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Awesome!
Comment from winnona
This is a well-written contest entry. I think you did well completing the challenge of the contest. The words flowed line to line combining and forming the message of the poem for the reader.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2016
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This is a well-written contest entry. I think you did well completing the challenge of the contest. The words flowed line to line combining and forming the message of the poem for the reader.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2016
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Thank you Winnona for this wonderful review.
God bless!
Comment from Ima L. Ami
This is a beautiful, well written sonnet. I could feel the love as well as the hesitation and fear of rejection. Excellent meter and rhyme. It flows so lightly, it feels as if the words are dancing on the page.
One note:
---I pray the heart will render thy eyes blind.
I think this should be "thine eyes" due to the word "eyes" beginning with a vowel. Similar to the rule for "a" and "an" ( a dog; an elephant).
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2016
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This is a beautiful, well written sonnet. I could feel the love as well as the hesitation and fear of rejection. Excellent meter and rhyme. It flows so lightly, it feels as if the words are dancing on the page.
One note:
---I pray the heart will render thy eyes blind.
I think this should be "thine eyes" due to the word "eyes" beginning with a vowel. Similar to the rule for "a" and "an" ( a dog; an elephant).
Comment Written 25-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2016
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Wow! Thank you Ima for this exceptional six star review my friend. I am honored to receive such a review. I struggled with thy and thine and appreciate the time you have taken to help in this area.
God bless!
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:) You're very welcome; you deserved 7!
Comment from Irish Rain
I love this....ADORE the third verse, got to be the winner here!!! 'I pray the heart will render thy eyes blind.' Perfect!!!! Blessings...
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2016
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I love this....ADORE the third verse, got to be the winner here!!! 'I pray the heart will render thy eyes blind.' Perfect!!!! Blessings...
Comment Written 23-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2016
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Thank you Irish for this most inspiring review. I have only written 2 other sonnets and really enjoy the challenge.
God bless!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
These unattractive features that are me,
That's why it's best to meet in dim light. People tell me I look just like Brad Pitt, with the lights off.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2016
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These unattractive features that are me,
That's why it's best to meet in dim light. People tell me I look just like Brad Pitt, with the lights off.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2016
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LOL! I thoroughly enjoyed this awesome review my friend. Thank you and God bless
Comment from tfawcus
Perfect rhyme scheme, cadence and turning point in the third quatrain. Is heartbeat one word where you come from? It is in my part of the world! Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Fortunately love is sometimes blind! LOL
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2016
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Perfect rhyme scheme, cadence and turning point in the third quatrain. Is heartbeat one word where you come from? It is in my part of the world! Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Fortunately love is sometimes blind! LOL
Comment Written 23-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2016
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LOL! It is one word in my world as well Tony! Thank you for catching that and for the awesome review,.
God bless!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good and interesting sonnet you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Good job. Teri
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2016
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This is a very good and interesting sonnet you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Good job. Teri
Comment Written 23-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2016
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Thank you Teri for this most inspiring review my friend. I enjoy these every now and again.
God bless!
Comment from foxangie123
This is filled from top to bottom with outstanding passion. It is truly excellent and something we all long for in this life. If I had six left they'd be yours.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2016
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This is filled from top to bottom with outstanding passion. It is truly excellent and something we all long for in this life. If I had six left they'd be yours.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2016
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Wow! Thank you for this most exceptional review my friend. I will take a great review like this over a six any day.
God bless!
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Truly Phenominal.
