Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko

Excellent

The objective correlative of the poem constitute reminiscences of an "unstable-man"whose union with his wife brought about "stability".The poem earns its texture from the use of metaphors.Excellent!Bravo!

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2016

---

reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016

Thank you for the read and the comment.

reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 19-Oct-2016

Thanks.Remain Blessed!

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

A nicely written free verse on love, a nice tribute to the one you love. drinking the wine of life together . good luck on this and have a good day.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2016

---

reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016

Thank you, Sir, for the read and the comment.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very sweet and well written poem you have penned about your wife! You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery! Good luck in the contest. Teri

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2016

---

reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016

Thank you for the read and the comment.