Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

I think that the elections are way beyond morals and if it were they both have struck out in my book. You did an excellent job with penning this though.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016

Thanks for you review.

reply by foxangie123 on 20-Oct-2016

My pleasure🤗

Comment from jaybird1

Excellent

Amen Amen and I hope you are right.It is his depth of thought that is deplorable.You
nailed this one.Brief, but ever so great.He and Putin, what a pair

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2016

Thanks for your review.

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

Very interesting words
for this poem who wins
wins I guess time will tell
who the next president will be.
Great to read.

Honey tree
I have no six left


honeytr

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016

Thank you for the read and the comment.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written prophetic poem. I think the USA will be better off without Trump, Hillary can still be worked on I suppose, but he will not change at all.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016

Cannot agree more. Thanks for the read.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Good

Good writing, but terrible taste in politics. Hillary deserves jail. She lies every time she speaks, She betrayed our country and continues to get away with it.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2016

The other choice is abominable. Sexual abuse is what deserves jail.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

haha, not sure there is a moral decision between these two. nicely done, good entry has rhyme and a message. good luck and have a great day.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2016

Thank you, Sir.

Comment from cflorian8

Excellent

"A Moral Decision," is a well-written poem. I enjoyed reading your piece because though the poetry was short, the message was clear and rhyming precise. In short, vote for Hilary, Trump will send this country to hell in a blaze so hot that Lucifer would swell with pride.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2016

Yeah, it is too bad the Repubs could not come up with someone better.

Comment from Michelle1959

Excellent

Hi! Very great writ. I like how you put it together in reality of it all and even how who will know the outcome because your so correct, "Our votes will render amoral decision." I admire your write on political view. One reason is because I can't do that as the gift you have and that is good because opinions and viewpoints I love because I learn and change and grow and compile it all together to make choices and decisions on what I learn, know, read, and then I am freely without doubt capable and comfortable of my own choice and decisions and knowing it was complied with my thoughts and others views etc. Great writing. Great talent.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2016

Thank you so much for the read and the kind words. We should always be in the process of becoming.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

Well, I do hope this prophecy comes true for all the reasons cited in your poem.
Excellent use of -able/ible rhyme.
What really works, however, is your closing couplet.
Well done in only 7 lines. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2016

Thank you, sir.

Comment from elloramen

Excellent

I love that you incorporated actual language from the campaign and made it work as your own. I think county is supposed to read country. I also think the message of the poem is clear, to the point, and it is awesome that it can be done so concisely.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2016

You are right, I will correct. Thanks.