Comment from EricBrady

Excellent

Beautiful entry for the contest. Great choice of "P" words. Perfect, Praising, Placing, Praying, Passionate, Proud and Pleasing are all great descriptions of our walk with God. My favorite line is the third one. "Placing faith and trust in God"; If we can do this, everything else will fall into place. Great rhyming to make it flow. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2016

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Eric,

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings...................

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This is an unmetered, rhyming couplet interpretation of Isaiah 26:3 in KJV. It qualifies as a Pleiades poem by virtue of its seven lines all beginning with the same initial letter as the title, "Peace". The seventh line, outside the couplet format also echoes the title, ending on the word "

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Pantygynt,

Thanks for taking the time in giving this poem a review. Blessings.................

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Nicely done on peace, I like how you used peace as well in the poem. A nice poem of faith in this peace poem. Good luck and have a great day.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2016

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William,

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. Blessings..........

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Pleiades Poem. To find God's peace is the most precious emotion we can ever find. There is nothing that can disturb your inner peace when you find the peace from God.

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Sandra,

Thanks so much for you review, very kind and wise comments. Blessings.............

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Very nice devotional entry for this contest with a clear, inspiring theme and fine medley of P-words plus rhyming and near rhyming. Fine assonance of A as well. I like that the first rhyme pair are alliterated too. Fine flow. Good luck.

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2016

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Thanks so much my friend, for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings..................

reply by rama devi on 15-Oct-2016

Blessings! :-)))

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Pleasant and calming reminder! Great use of 'P' words in each line and I like how it ends with the title, "peace." The list of verbs in each line gives such a complete guide of all one needs for peace: seeking, praising, praying, loving and obeying God!

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2016

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Thanks so much for giving this poem a read, your review, kindness and comments are greatly appreciated. Blessings.................

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

God and peace go hand in hand as you very well stated and an excellent reference to the verse quoted.
A strong entry and very well done

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Barb,

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments they are greatly appreciated. Blessings...................

Comment from RoostyNester

Excellent

A wonderful Pleiades poem. Well done with the same beginning letter as your title. You message was loud and clear, and gave insight to your walk with God. Very well done.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2016

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Thanks so much my friend, for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings................................

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

I truly like this Pleiades poetry contest entry you have written. You used very good wording and beautiful imagery. Good luck in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2016

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Thanks so much for the review , very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings.........

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

A very strong and meaningful poetic verse that will be a strong contender in this contest. Spirituality is alway a big hit. Well done.

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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings..........................