Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

So dainty and pretty. Peace is one of my daughters middle name. This is so inspiring and filled with sweet and special warm hugs for each reader. It rocks.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Your daughter's middle name rocks, beautiful! Blessings.................and sending you a HUG!

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, anonymous,

I like your Pleiades poem. It was smart to use your rhyme but it's hard to rhyme with an odd number of lines, you did well. The presentation is beautiful and the subject is well executed. Good luck, honey.

gypsy

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016

Hello my Friend,

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings...................................

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a very fine entry for the contest
Excellent choice of word in "peace"
There are so many interpretations of peace
Religious peace as you have used
Global peace, freedom from war
Inner peace and calm from mediation
Your poem is true to the Pleiades form
and include rhyme as well
Excellent art work
Well done
Best wishes in the contest

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings.............................

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Beautiful image and nice presentation.
-You followed directions for the prompt,
and I like your choice of words.
-Each line adds good description and message.
-It is also a very positive poem; I think many
of us would like to have "perfect peace" in our world.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016

Pam,
Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. There are so many special friends and loved one in my life who is named Pam. I am sure you are just as sweet and kindhearted as they are. Blessings..........................

reply by Pam (respa) on 17-Oct-2016

You are quite welcome. That is unusual to have many people with the name Pam. I knew one girl when growing up, and hear of a few more recently, but not a lot. I would say that I am kind and usually have a positive outlook.

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This Pleaides poem is well rhymed and well written. I like the message it presents and the spiritual tone. Very well done.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings......................

Comment from flylikeaneagle

Exceptional

Great witness praising Jesus in the world. I like the placing faith and trust in God.
Focus on Jesus as we learn on the path he lit for our steps. Great poem for this challenge. God bless!
flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016

Thanks so much my friend for your review and very kind comments. Blessings........

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Amen. Love this. Pleasing God brings great peace, and makes sense of this crazy world. Wonderful entry you have here, I love it. Blessings....

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016

Thanks so much my friend for your review and very kind comments. Blessings..........

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

I would like to believe that pleasing God gives everyone peace, Portia.
But sadly, I realize all too well that this is not the case.
Good use of rhyming to keep this inspirationally faith based Pleiades poem rolling right along.
Good work...

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016

Dean,

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Dean, this is a Blind Entry, how did you know I penned this? I betcha its my style of writing isn't it? Thanks so much for the best wishes my friend.............

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

What an inspiring piece of writing. The alteration caused by the requirement to start each line with the same letter enhances your words and makes them almost echo--becoming more memorable.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings...................

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A very nice entry in this Pleiades poetry contest. Good P sounds, and my favourite contest, because it talks of a godly approach to life, obedience to God, brings all these marvellous benefits with them! Well done, in rhyming, articulate verse, good luck, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016

Roy,

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings.........................

reply by royowen on 16-Oct-2016

Most welcome