Forward-march
Don't linger in the rearview mirror.6 total reviews
Comment from angel123
I like your inspiring words of wisdom. Your message is clear and straight to the point. I also like the title of Your poem and it flows well with a good artwork choice.
Angel123
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
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I like your inspiring words of wisdom. Your message is clear and straight to the point. I also like the title of Your poem and it flows well with a good artwork choice.
Angel123
Comment Written 15-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dawn Munro
This is a wonderful entry for this contest, my friend. Alliterative and so true, both in its sage advice and in its statement that the past beckons - who among us does not have baggage? Best of luck!
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
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This is a wonderful entry for this contest, my friend. Alliterative and so true, both in its sage advice and in its statement that the past beckons - who among us does not have baggage? Best of luck!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
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Thanks, Dawn. Appreciate the kind review.
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You're welcome. :)
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for your good advice. I admired your extremely contrasting words and effective alliteration to make your point in this poem with its colorful presentation. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
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Thank you for your good advice. I admired your extremely contrasting words and effective alliteration to make your point in this poem with its colorful presentation. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 14-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
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Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A very good poem. What's that monkey doing on the Yellow Brick Road? He's going to wind up road kill if he doesn't get out of the middle of the street.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016
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A very good poem. What's that monkey doing on the Yellow Brick Road? He's going to wind up road kill if he doesn't get out of the middle of the street.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016
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Ha ha...Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from tfawcus
Certainly one of the more impressive poems that I have read, that use this form. Of course, the advice to put the past behind one and to concentrate on the future makes good sense. Future plans can do much to enhance the present moment, whereas dwelling on the past can have a stultifying effect on our lives.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016
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Certainly one of the more impressive poems that I have read, that use this form. Of course, the advice to put the past behind one and to concentrate on the future makes good sense. Future plans can do much to enhance the present moment, whereas dwelling on the past can have a stultifying effect on our lives.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016
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Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Dustybones
Good poem that matches the picture like a boat and the water. Well the best I can think of right now. A monkey with a ? mark and a artist looking ahead with a vision. How great! dustybones
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016
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Good poem that matches the picture like a boat and the water. Well the best I can think of right now. A monkey with a ? mark and a artist looking ahead with a vision. How great! dustybones
Comment Written 12-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2016
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Thanks for the kind review.