I'm Dead And I Don't Like It At All!
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Comment from BeasPeas
Good job with this "observation" from beyond the grave. They
probably do look in on their own funerals being newly dead and
all. I'm sure our eyes are opened up to a lot of things when we
cross over. I see you placed in this contest, too. Congratulations.
Marilyn
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2016
Good job with this "observation" from beyond the grave. They
probably do look in on their own funerals being newly dead and
all. I'm sure our eyes are opened up to a lot of things when we
cross over. I see you placed in this contest, too. Congratulations.
Marilyn
Comment Written 08-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2016
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Thanks for the compliments, Marilyn! It, like most of my stuff, was fun to write.
Don
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
lol....great entry into the Funeral contest. Very funny lines and I really had a great laugh at most. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2016
lol....great entry into the Funeral contest. Very funny lines and I really had a great laugh at most. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 06-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2016
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Thank you for your excellent review and good wishes, Susanne! I'm very pleased my poem made you laugh.
Comment from pharp
Excellent job in the penning of this poem. I like the humor which really brought a smile to my face. Excellent rhyming and a most enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing and the very best to you in the contest. Blessings........Portia
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2016
Excellent job in the penning of this poem. I like the humor which really brought a smile to my face. Excellent rhyming and a most enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing and the very best to you in the contest. Blessings........Portia
Comment Written 06-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2016
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Thank you for your excellent review and good wishes, Portia! I'm glad my poem made you smile.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Very creative. I love the natural rhyme - perfect word choices. The dark theme of your poem that doesn't match the upbeat tone which I greatly enjoy. Very fun and creative.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2016
Very creative. I love the natural rhyme - perfect word choices. The dark theme of your poem that doesn't match the upbeat tone which I greatly enjoy. Very fun and creative.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2016
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Thank you very much, Michael, for your complimentary and insightful comments!
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well. Your artwork and background color completes the piece.Your words flowed together easily and combined forming the message of the poem for the reader.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2016
A well-written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well. Your artwork and background color completes the piece.Your words flowed together easily and combined forming the message of the poem for the reader.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2016
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem, Winnona. Much appreciated!