Comment from winnona

Excellent

A very nicely written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well. Your well-chosen words flowed easily together line to line and combining sent the message of your poem to the reader.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings.......................

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

I like this and the thought put into this but do not consider it an antonym lightness and pure love or darkness brings hate. good luck and have a good day.

I see what you are saying, I see how it worked

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2016

William
Thanks for your review, I may have misunderstood the requirements but they are as follow;
-Choose two words or ideas that are opposite in meaning and write one cinquain for first word/idea and one cinquain for the opposite word/idea.

So, I chose Lightness for the first cinquain and Darkness the opposite word for the second one. If I am wrong in my understanding of how this is to be done, please clarify for me. Your kindness and helpfulness will be greatly appreciated. Blessings.................................

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

very nicely written...and so very true...God is light...and darkness doesn't have a chance...I love your poem...and a stunning picture...xxoo Love Linda

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2016

Thanks so much my friend for your review and kind comments. Blessings...........................

reply by l.raven on 03-Oct-2016

you are so very welcome...and blessings to you as well...xxoo Love