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Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "The Dancing Shoes"
A delightful Childen Lesson Book.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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Yep, those glass slippers are pretty special and make a girl feel like she is floating on air. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2016
    I just added another chapter.
    Having fun with this!
    Ricky...
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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Very interesting story here.

Definitely a pair of shoes with "a mind of their own".

Good characterization used throughout the telling of this story.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2016
    Yes and thanks
    Brett.
    I will develpoe an ending ..
    Today.
    Think Johnny Depp meets Cinderela with a littlebit if Travolta thrown in.
    Ricky.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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I'm not sure if you meant to post this or not, so I've giving you the benefit of the doubt and assuming this got posted by mistake. If not, then I'm not sure what it's supposed to mean. I had one the other day that posted way before I was ready for it. People were a bit confused. Now I make sure ahead of time.

Rhonda

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2016
    Thanks Rhonda.
    That was a save till I could post.
    Coming soon...
    Started..
    Thanks,
    Ricky....