Comment from RodG

Good

You have made us see these butterflies "parading" through a garden, but I do not get a sense of how they die in nature. Yes, their longevity is "brief," but I would like to see the Speaker's reaction to a dead butterfly he found.

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2016

Thanks so much for your review and comments, the speaker has re-worded the haiku to make it a bit clearer, Your review and comments are greatly appreciated. Blessings.......................

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a good entry for the contest
with permitted syllable count at 3-8-1
also giving S/L/S
good imagery of butterfly and beauty
and a solid satori comment in the single word "brief"
made briefer by mankind
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings my friend..........................