Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

This is a great entry into the 5-7-5 poem about sex contest. In the 70's, I am sure Shirley was not the only one to take that walk of shame! lol. Great job. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016

Thanks for the review. Tiptoeing through the park sunday morning, disco dress still sparkling and heels in hand.... c'mon, we've all done it, ha ha cheers, j

reply by Susanne M. Psyris on 25-Sep-2016

You are so serious! I have done it myself and made my sister do it with me! For shame, for shame! lol...God bless and hugs, Susanne

reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016

Just one of those things that you know you will laugh about years later, maybe a low gutteral laugh, ha ha, At least we had fun, cheers, j

reply by Susanne M. Psyris on 25-Sep-2016

I DO laugh about it now...when I remember the disco outfit I was wearing! OMG! God bless and hugs, Susanne

Comment from tollyfaye

Excellent

hehehehe! A love this. Captures a moment/morning in time. Great job with few words and syllables--transpires a a story still.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016

Thanks for the review. Yeah, tiptoeing through the park with disco dress and heels in hand... c'mon, we've all done it. ha ha Cheers, j

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

Ohh, this is a fine 5-7-5 that is humorous and vivid. Your poem is more about the consequences of sex than about sex. It reminds me of people having a wild Saturday night and a contrite Sunday morning. The rain evokes tears of shame.

Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016

That snazzy dress and heels seem to lose their glitter on a rainy sunday morning walk of shame ha ha, Thanks for the review, cheers, j

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements beautifully with a correct line and syllable count. You handled the topic quite tastefully as you leave it to the reader to fill in the details. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016

Thanks for the review. The infamous walk of shame, when that fancy outfit looks so out of place in the morning ha ha, cheers, j