Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

Truly an excellent poem. I feel so much empathy for your and how you still must feel after such a long time. Time DOES NOT heal all wounds. We may not every heal. I have you in my prayers each night for healing and accepting what happened in your life. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016

Acceptance descibed...
Able to function?
Yes in Eternal Pain.
Empafy?
Able tk emote?
Puddles sorth.
Sufferage?
Nevef ends...
Life?
For most?
Wonderful.
For...
'A Cbild Loser?'
Death..
Thanks for the offerings.
Ricky..

Comment from SheliaStarr

Good

I enjoyed this very much. It was touching, and emotional, and beautiful. Thank you.

However, you should probably revise spelling.

Great job!

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016

I cast on a phone which makes it hard to read Spell,check.
Thanks,
Ricky 1024.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I am so sorry for your loss and so close to home too. But that is often the case, those few yards make a life time of difference. The pain never goes away, it doesn't matter what people tell you. We are left at the end with the knowledge that we must believe in God, if not, what was the purpose of our short lives? Your poem is full of questions and in some cases you answer them too, it's a really excellent way to cope with grief. Amazing poem, Ricky. Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2016

Thanks Sandra the earlier reviewer liked it but took,aeay for spelling?
I dont like to review wthat way.
Ricky...