My first Motorcycle Ride
That great first ride that is forever burned in my memory5 total reviews
Comment from Spitfire
This is a howl! Totally unexpected ending. Love that the cars turned around to get a second look. I felt the force of the wind even more when I learned of its talent. LOL
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
This is a howl! Totally unexpected ending. Love that the cars turned around to get a second look. I felt the force of the wind even more when I learned of its talent. LOL
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your review. I still have nightmares about that ride! LOL
Comment from Judy Couch
Funny. One thing to look at: "unbuttoned my blouse with all those tiny buttons that was now flapping in that same demonic wind." This is a little confusing. I wasn't sure if the buttons were flapping or the blouse.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2016
Funny. One thing to look at: "unbuttoned my blouse with all those tiny buttons that was now flapping in that same demonic wind." This is a little confusing. I wasn't sure if the buttons were flapping or the blouse.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2016
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Thank you, I see what you mean. It is a bit confusing and I should have caught that. Thank you for your feedback and your review. And I think the whole thing including those awful little buttons was flapping in the breeze! LOL
Comment from wilkswrites
Your story was really cute. I bet you felt marvelous with the wind blowing on you despite your predicament. Great story! Especially to pass down to your children and grand children as one of the funny ones.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016
Your story was really cute. I bet you felt marvelous with the wind blowing on you despite your predicament. Great story! Especially to pass down to your children and grand children as one of the funny ones.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016
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Thank you, I won't soon forget that! LOL
Comment from William Ross
hahaha, very good, yeah I bet that was a bit embarrassing. good write well presented and written. Good Luck on this and have a wonderful dat
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016
hahaha, very good, yeah I bet that was a bit embarrassing. good write well presented and written. Good Luck on this and have a wonderful dat
Comment Written 21-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016
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Thank you for your very nice review. I must tell you I am STILL traumatized to this day. LOL
Comment from oliver818
Wow now that is embarassing. I hate that feeling when you realise people are laughing at you, not with you.
One spag- You forgot to put a capital letter on the g of "Get out here."
Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016
Wow now that is embarassing. I hate that feeling when you realise people are laughing at you, not with you.
One spag- You forgot to put a capital letter on the g of "Get out here."
Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016
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Thank you for your excellent review and thank you for the heads up. I will definitely change that.