Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Portia,

I enjoyed your contest entry for the beauty of autumn. Your artwork is perfect. Good job on the syllable counts per line. I LOVE you color scheme--perfect for Fall. You did a great job with just a few syllables to express this beautiful scene. I love the season of Fall. Good job with the alliteration of 's' & the 's' sound. I know how those sudden breezes come out of nowhere. There are not many leaves where I live. But the ones that are here blow down the streets without warning.

Good job & thanks for sharing.

Best wishes in the contest. Jan

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 Comment Written 20-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2016

Jan,

You are so kind. Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, very kind comments and best wishes. Lots of Love..........Portia

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

I live in Florida. We don't have autumn here. The only difference between summer and winter for us is we don't have to mow our yard as often.

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 Comment Written 20-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2016

Thanks so much for your review and comments. Florida is our family favorite place to visit and we visit every year and stay in Orlando. Portia