Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Lovely presentation complimenting this most beautiful season. The words are well suited to the season and leave one with a peaceful feeling. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings.....................Portia..

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, my friend, I don't believe we have met before. You must know that I love haiku and other short poetry so whenever I see a contest I always vote.

Let's see ...
presentation= beautiful earthy browns, nice!
syllable count= 5/7/5 good job! This is an important part in this contest.
senses= feel and sound... but you go beyond with the enchanting state of awe
suggestion= none, you did an awesome job!

good job and good luck, sweetie pie.

gypsy

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2016

Hello Gypsy Blue Rose,

It is a great honor to meet you and also let you know in my eyes you are the Queen when it comes to the penning of haikus. I am finally beginning to understand how to pen them.

This outstanding review coming from you my friend put a GREAT BIG SMILE on my face. Thanks for making my day. Lots of love..............................Portia

Comment from Unspoken94

Excellent

An excellent 5-7-5 of Autumn and how the wind
can cause a path of such beauty. Great picture as
well. l wish you all the best in the contest. The
picture alone could win it. -Bill

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2016

Bill,

Thanks so much my friend for such an outstanding review. Blessings.....................Portia

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Portia, this is just beautiful...I can hardly wait for Autumn to get here...it is one of the most beautiful seasons of the year...the colors are just amazing...very well written sweet girl...love your poem...and love the picture...Love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2016

You are so kind; thanks so much for such an outstanding review and very kind comments. Blessings and Lots of love........................Portia

reply by l.raven on 25-Sep-2016

you are so welcome Portia....and Blessings to you as well...love xxoo Linda

Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

A beautiful presentation! The color of the artwork is expressed well, in your line, "spreads out rusted golden leaves". I like your choice of words to describe autumn, with all its beauty. The title says it well, "Enchanting forest". I also like the rhymes of breeze with leaves. Very clever. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Jesse

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2016

Jesse,

Thanks so much for your very kind and supportive review. Blessings my friend....................Portia

reply by Jesse James Doty on 21-Sep-2016

Hello Portia,
You are welcome, my friend.
Jesse

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

Pharp...very lovely entry into the contest. Love the artwork you chose to enhance your well-penned words. Great imagery created in so few syllables. Excellent job on this one. Good luck in the contest. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings....................Portia

reply by Susanne M. Psyris on 20-Sep-2016

Very welcome!!! God bless and hugs, Susanne

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Nice, good thoughts as the colorful leaves do make the forest look enchanted. Great job and best of luck on this have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2016

William,

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings.................Portia

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Fall being my favorite time of the year, needless to say, I enjoyed the image you've projected here in your Beauty of Autumn 5-7-5 entry, Portia.
There is an enchanting feeling about a forest when it has been emblazoned and dressed in the bright colors of Fall.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2016

Thanks Dean, I appreciate your very kind review and best wishes. Blessings.....................Portia

Comment from Susan Chetcuti

Excellent

Short and sweet. I enjoyed reading it.
Spreads out rusted golden leaves. I loved the way you worded it.
The gorgeous picture blended in nicely.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings..............................Portia

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Great choice of words which reminds me of the crunch of autumn leaves. You captured that sudden autumn wind moment so well. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings....................Portia