Geoffrey's Musings.
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 " The Confused Colours."A book of Stories, Essays and Poetry.
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Hahahaha, this is a really funny sketch of the blonde redhead who cannot figure out her finger hurts and not the places she touches.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Hahahaha, this is a really funny sketch of the blonde redhead who cannot figure out her finger hurts and not the places she touches.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Thanks Sandra. It needs some changes... Let you know when they are done. Chiz
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Changes made.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
OH Goodness. I laughed till I cried.
So nicely done and very well told.
I never saw it coming till you got me.
Someone on here did a lot of blond jokes but he missed this one
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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OH Goodness. I laughed till I cried.
So nicely done and very well told.
I never saw it coming till you got me.
Someone on here did a lot of blond jokes but he missed this one
Comment Written 16-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Thanks Barb, changes coming, let you know when done.
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Changes made.
Comment from Ulla
Hi There, this was very short indeed and it did read like a joke. Yeah, the saying goes, well it's a well known fact that blonds and redheads have a very low pain tolerance. Worst for the redheads. So her finger was broken and she hurts all over. All the best. Ulla:)
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Hi There, this was very short indeed and it did read like a joke. Yeah, the saying goes, well it's a well known fact that blonds and redheads have a very low pain tolerance. Worst for the redheads. So her finger was broken and she hurts all over. All the best. Ulla:)
Comment Written 16-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Thanks Ulla some changes are coming. Cheers.
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Changes made.
Comment from AnnieDawn
I have to tell you that you lift my spirits when I am down. I love your humor. It comes at just the right time and I can tell that you pray. God is good and believe me, He is using your writing in more ways than you can even imagine. Great job.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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I have to tell you that you lift my spirits when I am down. I love your humor. It comes at just the right time and I can tell that you pray. God is good and believe me, He is using your writing in more ways than you can even imagine. Great job.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Thanks Sis King Solomon said it right..."Laughter doeth good like a medicine!" Changes coming, Lord bless.
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Changes made.
Comment from mfowler
Now that's better than flash fiction.
Your little play is well scripted and
easy to follow. The build up to that
killer punch line was slow and layered.
The blonde (nice 'dumb'stereotype) keeps
feeling hurt on body parts she touches,
but she needs to pay the good doctor to
have it 'pointed' out, that her malady
is a broken finger. Almost Irish in its
humour, this one.
Well put together and excellent read.
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Now that's better than flash fiction.
Your little play is well scripted and
easy to follow. The build up to that
killer punch line was slow and layered.
The blonde (nice 'dumb'stereotype) keeps
feeling hurt on body parts she touches,
but she needs to pay the good doctor to
have it 'pointed' out, that her malady
is a broken finger. Almost Irish in its
humour, this one.
Well put together and excellent read.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2016
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Thanks mate some changes have been suggested. Let you know when done.
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Changes made.
