Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

How about an alarm clock??

Seriously, Geoff, I loved this. There's humour underlying the poet's desperate cry AND it rhymes. Well done, friend. Hope this is the beginning of a flood.

Sonali

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

Working on it Sis. We had a blast on Sunday. Saw you came through there. I do have a couple of stories in preview just needing tying up a bit. I think you know depression was my problem and you also know the cause of same. But you and Mikey I likey hehe Michael Cahill and Bob Hartson (Mastery) have given me the kick in the behind I needed to hang around.

God Bless,

reply by Selina Stambi on 12-Sep-2016

No, didn't know about the depression. So sorry to hear. Love the GIF with the kanga. How do you do it?

reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

Dean Kuch made the Siggy for me. Old Tom forbids use on Reviews which it was originally made for but Dean says we can get away with it on replies etc. Ask him top help you.

reply by Selina Stambi on 12-Sep-2016

Okay, thanks. Say hi to Louise.

Comment from RoostyNester

Excellent

I know the feeling. Why is it when you are no where near a pen and paper, the poems flow? But the moment you sit with writing on your mind....nothing comes. I liked your poem. Very well done.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

Thanks Roosty nester have we met before? Have to check out your stuff. I have a picture I got somewhere of Snoopy on his typewriter in the middle of the night sitting on Charley Brown...reminds me of the early morning I dived out of bed to get the first lines of a Song of mine down hehe.

Chiz,

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Well don't give up. Your muse is taking a break. But that doesn't mean she's gone. The fog will lift. Very clever little poem.

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

Thanks, June, appreciate you coming by. I know what the cause of Muse fog was but praise God that has lifted now must have been the great time we had on Sunday up the mountains. I posted some photos about it on Face book. Let me know can't remember if we are friends on there or not.

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

LOL - Been there - done that!

And the longer it goes - - -the more you fret it might not
come back to play!

Glad to see you're shaking it awake again :-)

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

Thanks, Friend. Have some stuff in preview mode just got to tie up some loose ends in them. Cheers.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

I truly know that feeling too my friend~ Its rough when they disappear! Very good descriptive wording. love the colors you used. Teri

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

Thanks Teri appreciate you coming by. As i said above have a couple of things in preview, just need to tie them up a bit. Cheers,

reply by Teri7 on 12-Sep-2016

you are so welcome my friend. Teri

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

Very nice work with this one and one I can relate to. All I write any more are Rambles...my muse has taken a very long vacation.

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

Sorry about the Muse's vacation and I too relate most assuredly! Have a good time in old Uncle Sam land but hurry back, ya hea!

Must be different crossing the border as a Dual Citizen I am guessing?

Chiz

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

My muse usually attacks me in the middle of the night. I WANT/NEED to sleep. LOL I might enjoy a few nights of no muse. I enjoyed reading your cute poem. I'm not sure your muse is missing, this is a good poem.

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 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

Maybe I am confused on my muse hehe. Thanks good friend. Have some in preview need to get out real soon.

Chiz,

Comment from Alex Rosel

Excellent

This is a snazzy short poem that brought a smile to mt face. I like these snappy poems they're great fun.

I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for posting it :-)

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 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

Thanks, Alex. Old Muse has been gone for ages. I do have a couple of bits of stuff in Preview I need to finish off. Cheers,